All Comments on 'Country Store Ch. 14'

As a reader, I had just started to flow with the story's rhythm then boom it's over

. The effect whether intended or not is that the author is pulling my chain. I suppose that's always true but blatantly so in this instance.

Three pages should be the minimum standard in terms of non-flash stories. This was a lovely little snippet but all too brief.

Great new chapter! I like how you have created a new internal conflict with Kim's desire for both her lovers.

I am eager to read the next chapter in Kim's tale.