by dbconor
I could not get past the first few poorly written sentences and feel more time could have been devoted to editing.
Written by, and for, the sexually deranged. No redeeming features. Likely written by a 13 year old.
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Wendy is completely ignoring her husband and has only lust for Tom. John and Wendy’s vacation to reconnect emotionally and sexually is very much on a “slippery slope”. Will the only fame ignited be between Tom and Wendy? I hope that the author gives John a little more character rather than a dumb jack-off voyeur which tends to be a cliché in many stories on Literotica. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
it is one stupid story by trying to give John any sense of concern or reticense about Wendy's lust for Tom's cock. One knows where the storyline is going from the first paragraph or two of the first chapter.
I naively thought this might develop into a hot foursome, but this is starting to read like a CleoRA story with another dipshit, deer-in-the-headlights husband who enjoys his humiliation.
But why this ridiculous "12" -inch fantasy crap. Why can't the bull just have a hard ol' eight incher? It's really kind of stupid.
nothing wrong with a loving wife in a strong marriage enjoying a big cock especially while on vacation