by teninchhammer10
I really like the series but why does it take a year between each chapter? You do need an editor.
Fantastic story - was really glad to see a third chapter in it. Hoping for more!
This has to be the hottest Literotica I've ever read please keep it up!
Love it absolutely amazing need more with mark getting his moms ass and Beth being added to the mix
Great story...lots of places for you to add on. Get Beth involved in s couple of different ways. More with mark and mom. Get the dads back into the picture
I would really like to read some more about Mark and Ashley fucking nod working on her ass, as a couple, not over-whelmed by their mothers. It would be interesting if the two dads came back home professing their physical love for each other. That would give an opening for the black stud to "join" them regularly.
Have enjoyed your story line so far. High hopes to read more in the future!
Don't bring the dads into this ever again, real men don't share. Mark should get them all and possibly impregnate his cousin and the neighbour and maybe the moms too.
The story is progressing wonderfully. It think it would interesting to add Beth and Mandy to the mix