All Comments on 'Cousin Walks In Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Get an Editor!!

https://www.literotica.com/editors/editors.php

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Length!

I really like the series but why does it take a year between each chapter? You do need an editor.

paulnypaulnyover 4 years ago
Glad for another chapter in this!

Fantastic story - was really glad to see a third chapter in it. Hoping for more!

JohntreeJohntreeover 4 years ago
Love it

Definitely enjoy how this story has unfolded

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is amazing

This has to be the hottest Literotica I've ever read please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Absolutely amazing

Love it absolutely amazing need more with mark getting his moms ass and Beth being added to the mix

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lol...you're not done yet!!!

Great story...lots of places for you to add on. Get Beth involved in s couple of different ways. More with mark and mom. Get the dads back into the picture

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Possibilities for chapter 4

I would really like to read some more about Mark and Ashley fucking nod working on her ass, as a couple, not over-whelmed by their mothers. It would be interesting if the two dads came back home professing their physical love for each other. That would give an opening for the black stud to "join" them regularly.

Have enjoyed your story line so far. High hopes to read more in the future!

englishnospeakenglishnospeakalmost 4 years ago
For chapter 4

Don't bring the dads into this ever again, real men don't share. Mark should get them all and possibly impregnate his cousin and the neighbour and maybe the moms too.

Daddy247365Daddy24736512 months ago

The story is progressing wonderfully. It think it would interesting to add Beth and Mandy to the mix

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