All Comments on 'Crazy from the Heat Ch. 01'

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maxx308maxx308about 11 years ago
Great read

Looking for more...........

mrpervy46mrpervy46about 11 years ago
Not Bad

This is a good beginning, and to let you know If homosexuaility is ok, why not incest. As long as both are consenting adults. Keep going honey, it's all good so far. I'm a shemale and had a long loving relationship with my father as my mother rejected us both me because I was a freak in her holier than thou attitude. I didn't mean to ramble hon, this is a good story so far keep going. Email if you need to it's ok.

brosismombrosismomabout 11 years ago
ok story

just a couple little thing,they got money why no generator,air con or even a pool to cool down in

but otherwise good stuff hope you continue and soon

jaccorjaccorabout 11 years ago
Don't let the nay sayers stop you!

Just keep writing. Don't let them put you down. Let those who have not sinned cast the first stone. I thought it was a good beginning.

LAROCLAROCabout 11 years ago
Good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep it going, they have only just started. It could be a long series, but they need back up power, oh! ya and a pool. They do live in Texas...........LAROC

sargedog1sargedog1about 11 years ago
continue please

a grand beginning. You need to work on fleshing out the characters more in the continued episodes. Explain the simple life values which keep mom from spending on certain comforts and locals. Work the progression to them having a fully sexual relationship, NO babies and happily ever after as husband and wife BS though please.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchabout 11 years ago

I can relate to the heat. When I was a kid in Kansas we endured a 115 heat wave with no ac. I'll cast the first stone..I don't like it.

poolstick66poolstick66about 11 years ago
outstanding start

great job, that's the stuff novels are made with.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 11 years ago
A good start

I hope that he gets his mom's pussy and satisfies her need for a man.

Thanks for the read.

ScarecrowAKAFearlessScarecrowAKAFearlessabout 11 years ago
PLZ CONTINUE

I want to know what happens plz continue

Corey2JustifiedCorey2Justifiedabout 11 years ago
Rated a three

I had a hard time taking this story seriously because they are millionaires; yet she has a job as a waitress at a bar, and the house has no generator.... Worst millionaires ever... I'm a realist

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited love.Reminds me of my mother and myself.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Contrary to the author's introduction, hopefully this will be a truly sensitive love story about a mother and son. A self-assurred and self-confident male can only began to realize and/or understand the safety, security and unconditional love a mother must feel knowing that her son only wants to please her. Where true, unconditional love exists, the can be no shame, guilt or self-loathing. Hopefully, mother and son will discover how boundless love is.

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