by BlewWater69
Hope this is just the beginning of a good friendship which will include the red haired Penny and sister Katie.
I have always enjoyed your work but, you are correct, you definitely need an editor. I hope there will be more chapters to come!
This has the makings of a good series, I hope that more stories with these characters are coming.
Good chapter 1 for a series, the characters are likeable and I think the tension between David and Penny is a good plot element. Also some fun foreshadowing given by the women in the story with different plot lines possible. I am interested in seeing where you take this story!! Look forward to future chapters.
Please make this a series. It has all the elements. Plus I want to see what happens between Penny, Anna and David.
I hope David gives penny an attitude adjustment with that big dick of his. Looking forward to more.
I thought you might be done after The Cherry Poppers concluded. I like your stories. Keep it up. I can wait a few weeks between chapters
Some people write great stories and in your case, you're one of those who pen terrific stories. Look forward to read the rest of the chapters of this group of players. Will not comment on the rest until the last chapter. Will hopefully be able to continue with a 5 Star rating, of which I cannot find any reason to think otherwise.
Sorry; lost me with "by old Volvo into my driveway". Inconsistent with quality!