Crime & Punishment: The Prequel Ch. 09

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"But we also need to do something about Patterson and Greco," Jimmy responded.

"Okay, let's divide our efforts. I'll get the file and let you take care of our would-be murderers."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Premises are ridiculous……….NEWS FLASH…….there are no VIRGINS, male or female at age 21 in Law School…….that species has been extinct for probably 40 years. The Cuck affinity shown by nearly every Lit. Author is so overpopulated……maybe 50-75 to one as to also be ridiculous. As well nearly all female lawyers and women executives are not doing 3 random strangers from Wall Street all together. Social suicide in the business world. Listen, try writing sex stories about normal but flawed people some resisting some falling. R. H.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This chapter was a real kick (while reading the last page I noticed I was listening to " It's Probably Me" by Sting and it fit the mood of the story quite well, an interesting coincidence.

I this story is leading to a major governmental, church and rich bastard burn down.

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerover 2 years ago

This sordid saga of corruption and amorality feels like the Borgias have been transplanted from medieval Italy into modern New York State. I love it and I can’t put into down. The only downside is that there isn’t much debauchery, but I don’t care. 5 stars.

johsunjohsunover 3 years ago

I'm loving this story, Love the complexity, love the drama, love the amorality of the women, love the corruption it talks about. I keep reminding myself that its fiction. Yes, there's a few typos, seems like I remember a 'your' instead of a 'You're' somewhere, probably in a different chapter, And a 'then' instead of a 'than'. But easily skipped over and I've seen similar, or worse, mistakes in the last decade or so from book published by name brand publishing houses.

(Slowly shaking my head in sadness at the state of education in the modern world.)

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But hey, this is a GREAT story. Five thumbs up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
@ Xzy89c1 Lot of reading what you don't like

Just saying you've gone through a lot of trouble for a story you could stop readi...

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