by RedHairedandFriendly
I had a little trouble finding your cadence at first. But a beautiful story nonetheless. I have read a lot of your prior work, and always enjoy seeing new entries from you. I would love to edit for you if you don't have anyone yet. :-)
This is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica. I love reading erotica but not the stories that has no plot and a different sex act in each paragraph. You have a talent with words that I envy.
Truly, this is the best piece I've found. It's beautifully written, classic in its ways and incredibly seductive with its erotic fantasies. Character arc was superb, and the romance spectacular. In all, just a brilliant story. You're extremely talented!