All Comments on 'Cristina's Visit with Dad'

Would have gotten a higher score except I don't read Spanish so I'm sure I missed some of it. One language or the other please.

Erica,

I am enjoying these stories more and more. Your writing is definitely getting better and hotter. Keep up the great work. Good luck. I am looking forward to this sequel wher she introduces more friends to her father...

The use of a foreign language without any translation loses the reader and kills the story completely. I ended reading with the very first use of a foreign language and its lack of a cross reference to meaning. In the future either warn the reader of this or don't use a foreign language anywhere in the text of the story.

The Spanish is fine. I don't speak Spanish but I know enough of it to get the point along with your English descriptions. English people can be pricks. They think everyone has to speak their language. I think sprinkling your native tongue in with the story gives it dimension and realism. Plus, I think Latinas will find it sexy.

Great job! More please!

Very hot but I feel like I lost alot not understanding the Spanish. Not really complaining though b/c I find Latinos (men and women) incredibly sexy! Good job.

Well it's a good read, but I don't speak nor read Spanish.. It would have been much better at least for me if you had put the translation in there too..

loved it, love all your stories. the spanish/english mix is hot

To all the crybabies that complain about the Spanish/English mix - get over it! Erica, your stories are hothothot. I don't speak or read Spanish but I have no problem following along. Gracias chica!

Hot story. A great write. U know just how to get me hard. I will read more from U!!

You had me hard, and kept me that way the whole story. Almost creamed myself when she asked daddy if she was still his princess! Wow! Perfectly naughty!!!

That was fucking erotic!

I loved that story I wish my daddy would fuck me like that. :'(

This is a good read but half of it is in Spanish. Translation would have been nice.

The Spanish added to the reality of the story. Spanish speakers seldom use only English. To those who complained about no translation: the English text fully explained what the Spanish meant. Excellent bilingual writing.

I have to agree about the Spanish killing the mood of the stories. Otherwise I would given them higher scores. And no, I'm not one ignorant English speakers, my Mother was born and raised in France, so I learned French.