All Comments on 'Cross My Heart Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Too Short

That was way to short after waiting for soo long. I hope the next one come a lot quicker.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Excellent

This is the most enthralling story I've read in a very long time. The writing is wonderful & deliciously erotic. I would love to read more installments

Brookie14Brookie14almost 18 years ago
superb

I love this story. So sexy. Can't wait to hear what happens next!

DesertPirateDesertPiratealmost 18 years ago
More!!!

I am confused at the time lapse and really hope you will continue this story. It's really good. I also liked your other one quite a bit. you do have a talent for writing. Thanks for the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I hope

that you are planning to continue this series! The chemistry between Kelly and Grant is amazing. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
crap

finish it or pull it,,,crap

PapaMikePapaMikealmost 7 years ago
And then?

Bring us here and chop us off. WTF???!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Now you're back let's finish this. It's good!

Now you're back let's finish this. It's good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ya need to finish this, it's going good! A little slowly, but good!

Keep going!

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