All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Quarantine'

hope you do more with this story!!

Outstanding!

Best story I've read in a while, def need second quarantine part

Love how Carla became Clara on page 5

Love family lust

Excellent story!

Very well written and lots of erotic fun!

Love the way you capture the different personalities.

Hope you write about their two week quarantine on land!

Thank you!

Love to see sister get knocked up as a result of brother’s cum. There was never any mention of her using any birth control. And would love to see mom run out of her birth control pills as they departed the ship, so that she might be fertile by the second week of their next 2 week quarantine, so she and daughter get to enjoy being pregnant together.

you told us what size sis's tit are but not mom.

Enjoyed the story very much!

just a shame it only went up to 5 stars deffo worth more well done

They come in month long packets, so if she was taking BC then she would have most likely been covered for the duration. Quarantine at home, though, is another matter.

I'vs read every single one of your stories ever since I discovered "The Dark Room" several years ago. This one was Meta, lol.

Quite an enticing and interesting story, kinda wish I was Daniel, sounds like some serious fun.. Lol

Love this story. More please love the progression

I hope part 2 is in the works for this story, good work keep it up.

Once again another hit. A fun read as well as sexy. I guess 5 pages is a short story compared to your last story, the 16 page Daddy Swap (a fantastic story). In all of your stories the characters have so much fun with sex. I must get to Australia to experience more of this.

Excellent storyline. Well written. Wouldn’t mind if there is a part 2!

I do hate shaved pussy and anal, I'm not Bi or gay. Well written and made very sexy.

I loved this story. A little disappointed that he didn't get his sister's ass too, but I took that to mean there'll be a Part 2 ... Please?

Great story for the pre dick ament we're in.

I don't know why the stars don't work on the new format but I give you 5 for sure. I enjoyed the way things progressed and the initial reluctance of Vera. Incest stories are not my usual choice but this one was hot and had some elements that hit my buttons. Good job.

Keep this story going . We need more chapters, TY

Loved the slow build up and how the mother directed the activities - will be reading more of your stories.

A pleasure to read, well written and certainly got me going.

Loved the story, wish my own quarantine was as interesting as theirs but my sister's are a long way away, and I'm stuck here with another 2 70 year olds. Wood love a part 2, is that to cum? cum on Nikki please your public.

Love the whole story. The buildup and anticipation had me hooked. I would love to read a chapter 2 with the home quarantine.

This works so well because the Mother steering the action is perfectly played! Your stories have a super sense of humor. More please ......

A great, light-hearted and sexy story. I always love your stories and this one made me smile as well as get rather excited...more than once.

I really enjoyed this story. It is very hot how the sister reluctantly joined in,and how slutty the mother was.

continue at home.

Thanks for this work. It was well written and really sexy. The only down side was that it ended abruptly.

I really hope there is a sequel or part two

This story was great. One of the best if not the best story I have read on this site about this topic. Very good buildup and it kept me wanting to continue reading. Hoping for a second chapter.

I have enjoyed this story a lot and masterbated almost 5 times. This story has a great plot. There should be a movie on this story.

Would love to see them in the new quarantine in the hotel. Perhaps they can hear their neighbors next door in the hotel fucking (father a two daughters perhaps) and we also see it from their point of view.

Then would love to see how their home life has changed when they have to stay at home In lockdown.

I agree an extremely hot mom and son and one of the best quarantine stories I have read.

We nned to know whats happens next!!!!

Definitely needs a sequel

Nikki,

This was a really good read.

Making the Mom the alpha aggressive character, was a great twist.

Really watching the sister bloom, as well.

Anyone who been stuck in a confined area, (pretty much everyone now) will feel this.

Nikki, I hope there will be more to this thruple, you've made?

All but anal was good. I'm not gay.

what is it with people saying stuff like this:

"All but anal was good. I'm not gay."

It was a guy fucking a woman in the ass.

The only gay scene here was the Mom eating out the Daughter.

Fun read. Chapter 2? Fun at home?

Did Vera get pregnant?? Or that's for after the cruise we find out, when Vera misses her period???

Fucking came so hard when Vera finally fucks her brother Daniel and then slutty mom Carla cleans out Daniels creampie from her daughters jizz oozing pussy. WoW! 5 stars.

Lovely writeup. But why is farther left out of this? Wouldn't it be good if whole family had fun?

Your story kept me hard through all 5 pages. Then I came hard!

Thank you.

Damn that was very arrousing, wish i knew how to make it happen in real life

More like a comedy

I thought this started out as a comedy but finally ended up like it should be GREAT story!

I think you left it open at the end... There should be a 2nd. chapter to this story beginning with the 2nd 2 weeks of Quarantine.

From an avid reader of literoctica

Marcus Horton

Loved the build up and anticipation for the first few pages! Please continue with the story

Loved the story and that mom was the aggressive one!

Ive had thoughts about tit fucking my buxom step sister and

Appreciate the fun story!!

Pretty weird and unrealistic, but actually horny too.

Interesting to hark back to shillings (not used in the UK since I was a nipper, in 1971) but the expression is "In for a penny(, in for a pound)" not a shilling.

one of those stories that gets you hooked...........loved it!!!

I appreciate your writing very much.

How about a follow up to this when they get home??

That would be a great addition.

I would love to read a sequel!

Classic piece! Deliciously designed and crafted, decorated in decadent style for a unique time slot in history. A SUPERB read.

What might a holiday adventure add, now that their perimeters have been breached?

Classic piece! Deliciously designed and crafted, decorated in decadent style for a unique time-slot in history. A SUPERB read.

What might a new holiday adventure add, now that all their perimeters have been breached?

Loved the story.

Can’t wait for the 2 weeks of home Quarantine.

Vera needs more fucking.

Very well done.

Haha, great sexy story and I love the twist at the end.

Very good! Had me hard for most of the story! More, please!

I loved this story it kept me Horny from start to finish ,PLEASE WRITE MORE TOO THIS STORY .............

I loved the story . Sadly I never had children and now my hubby is passed on. I did think it would be fun if I was the granny coped up with them. Lol

I've lost track of how many times I've read this one over the past months. But I keep coming back! Great job!

One of the best stories I have ever read on Literotica!

Very creative with the setting and the nuance of the sexual action. One of the best stories I've ever read

Lame story put me to sleep it was not a good ending too you didn't do a good job at all it was a waste of my time reading it i thought I would get into it but never did

How to start... Fawning praise and broad stroke criticism are both suspect and useless. Were there weak points? Yes. Were there places I would have written it differently? Yes. Did I have one hand otherwise engaged while reading? Absolutely. Will I read it again? Damn Straight.

Writing in the category is difficult, the economy of words, the slow burn, the need to see the characters move along the acceptance path from Don't! Stop! to Don't stop! All of these conspire against the author.

I found the dialogue believable (within the category)

The buen could have been slower, and it seems Mom might have served a better role as the voice of reason who first sides with the daughter then - frustrated herself - betrays the ideals of "not with family". Maybe. But I've been wrong already today.

Overall, a good read. Thanks for the stimulation.

That was fun, exciting and nicely written. Well done

Could use some illustrations, 're release in comic book graphic form.

Really great read would like to know of more to cum from Vera.

As always I loved it. To those who don’t like the plot, go write a story with a plot you want.

I have to agree with pandemicwriter. This was the third time I’ve come across this, and it’s still enjoyable.

Thanks!

Making the best of a bad situation, certainly didn't put me to sleep, rather the opposite, up, up and away :D. Well done Nikki, now to read part 2.

Good job... but Vera never got her poop chute packed. I know that there will be more fun during there next quarantine period. And you can't tell me that they won't continue their taboo activities when they get home. Please don't get Vera preggers.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

good fun, good read. makes me wonder about what some people really did during Quarantine on a ship or Hotel for 2 weeks

to bad they did not have these fake viruses back when i was younger...would have been a blast to be shut down with my sisters and mom...oh the fun we could have had....and no booty call step dad...but we were not afraid of our own shadows then....nikki_2021...you wrote an AWESOME story

The sex was fun to read. I do agree that the ending was rather abrupt. I don't object to anal as part of the story, but anal can have all kinds of health related implications. Anal should be done with a condom on the male partner, or the female having had a regiment of enemas to flush out the rectum and lower colon. Feces can be driven up the urethra of the male. Also flecks of feces/ecoli can be transferred to the vagina and female urethra if the male doesn't wash immediately after leaving the anus. Good sexual health habits should be encouraged even in sexual literature. I have asked guys "Would you stick your dick into a pile of your girlfriends/partners shit if they if they defecated?" Answer is usually "No." Well, anal is basically doing that. I won't say anal play can't be fun, but precautions must be encouraged. These stories are generally too free to encourage risky behavior. Not trying to be a "stick in the mud", but I am concerned. Overall, I enjoyed the story.

Absolutely sucking fucking wonderful, the three of them totally fucked up and fucking each other’s brains out. Pity you stopped short of the two weeks isolation at home. Omg what would I not give to get involved in a situation like this. Cunt lapping sex maniac U.K.

Extremely well done!

Great job avoiding the pitfalls of many authors on this site.

5 stars all the way.

Bill

to those who don't like anal,don't act like you know what you're talking about if you don't ,PLEASE !! when done right neither partner is getting shit on them or out of them .

That's was super hot. What took Vera so long to come around with all of that faking like she was put off? Mom was live, LARGE and IN CHARGE!!!!!! Straight freak she was especially with that anal action...GO MOM!!!!!!

Well deserved 5 ! ! !

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

That was great.

Good story. Good build up without being too long. I enjoyed it.

Omg that was perfect

That was such great, uninhibited fun!

Very well told, I was absorbed all the way through.

An EXCELLENT tale beautifully told.

Congratulations on one of the most interesting stories I have read recently, told in good English without reverting to the vernacular to often and then it is in the appropriate place.

I liked it. Unfortunately no outsiders were involved. Most other authors try to make their stories more interesting by turning the females into sluts who will screw anybody. Thanks for such a little jewel.

Fantastic story! Very hot! I just love a dirty mom who corrupts her kids! Goddamn it get me hard as steel! Thank you for sharing this story with us! 🍻🤘😆

He still Needs to Fuck His Sister in the Ass...

No romance, No kissing, Sister declining to participate at the end was a real turn off.

It did need romance.

Add Dad in the next part watching his wife royally fucjed by his Son.

After reading the 2nd part, I came back here to give this part 1 star as well. This series was pure shit.

So, I now can point to one benefit of COVID... it provided the premise for this great story. Now I need to read part 2.

I liked the premise of this story, but it was devoid of passion and emotion. The characters might as well have been robots. 3 stars.

I would like to take my two daughters on a cruise like this. Got me hot just thinking about that!