by marriedpervs
Any idea what 'disembark' means with regard to a ship??
"Use the verb disembark to describe leaving a ship, airplane or other type of vehicle,"
It has nothing at all to do with a ship leaving port!
Too long for nothing...Stupid thing the husband have to sleep in a tiny room...what the pleasure in that?
Just more fucking, and more fucking, and more fucking, . . . You think that sentence is monotonous and boring, try reading your own story.
try and find a story that you like and then tell us all about it. God you re a fucking dumbass dim wit! Gave the story a 5
Ok, there are a few mistakes, but I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next installment.
Please carry on.
You write like the reader is going to know who " I " is -- not until you say you are putting on a dress does the READER even know that "I" is a woman. I found this very distracting - have to read for CLUES to who is who. Might be a good story - but easy to go elsewhere. PLEASE help the reader out -
Great group sex! Very hot story! But where can you see Chapter 2? (there is no story in the list of your stories. can you give a link to the continuation?)