All Comments on 'Cruising For a Wild Fuck'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
"The announcement came from the ship's Captain that we were about to disembark, and so, pouring a third glass, "

Any idea what 'disembark' means with regard to a ship??

"Use the verb disembark to describe leaving a ship, airplane or other type of vehicle,"

It has nothing at all to do with a ship leaving port!

impo_60impo_60about 9 years ago
Too long for nothing...

Too long for nothing...Stupid thing the husband have to sleep in a tiny room...what the pleasure in that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Go back to the Group Sex category. The chimps seem to like it.

Just more fucking, and more fucking, and more fucking, . . . You think that sentence is monotonous and boring, try reading your own story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
monotonous and boring is your middle name dear annony!!

try and find a story that you like and then tell us all about it. God you re a fucking dumbass dim wit! Gave the story a 5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
very enjoyable

Ok, there are a few mistakes, but I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next installment.

Please carry on.

bloodpigbloodpigalmost 9 years ago
part 2

Can't wait for this to be continued!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
cucks and sluts are special.

Sorry you can't satisfy your wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Love it

Great Story! When is chapter 2 ready?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
INTRODUCE Characters

You write like the reader is going to know who " I " is -- not until you say you are putting on a dress does the READER even know that "I" is a woman. I found this very distracting - have to read for CLUES to who is who. Might be a good story - but easy to go elsewhere. PLEASE help the reader out -

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Animals

These people are no better than animals. Dumb animals at that.

GrandTruthseekeGrandTruthseekeover 1 year ago

Great group sex! Very hot story! But where can you see Chapter 2? (there is no story in the list of your stories. can you give a link to the continuation?)

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