All Comments on 'Cruising on the Jenny Green'

Great story!! I was grinning from ear to ear....

I loved this story from start to finish! Wonderful characters and a great setting!

Ronde is the best!!! Keep up the great work, Vee

ronde has always been one of my favourites... I'm glad I waited a couple of years to savour this one!

BTW, a sequel would be excellent.

Of all the Literotica I have read, this is at the top of the list!

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Once again ronde delivers the goods!

Only complaint would be the use of the "f" word. For me it just takes away from the sensualness. But wonderfully written, draws you into the story immediately.

great story. love to see a (or if already is one) the sequel

When are you going to do a sequel to this? Loved it.

Love it from the begining to the end. Ronde would love to read about there next trip. Keep up the good writing.

Ronde has done a fine piece of work.

Any more stories of the "Jenny Green" coming? Really enjoyed this one.

A great mix of humour, great characterisation and realistic dialogue (not to mention good sex!). It's really nice to read a piece that just sparkles like the sun on the water!

amusing

well written

MORE please

Even if I hadn't liked the story, the crab bit would have made it worth reading.

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You are one of the few writers on here who know how to put across a good story with a sense of humour and the sex is not in your face - well done

just started to read your stories and I am hooked, would really like to hear more about the next cruise with these wild ladies and thier freinds.

Excellent. Funny. Sexy and well written.

Having messed around with boats on and off since age twelve, I found the setting of this tale appealing. Your captain obviously had the experience of a lifetime on this cruise, and you told it very well. You write with restraint and precision, and are a more accomplished writer than most of the amateurs whose stuff I read. I enjoyed the way you began with only minimal description, and let the scene and the characters grow in my mind's eye until I felt as if I were on board.

I'm going to click you into my favorite author category as soon as I finish this.

This is the first of your stories that I've read. I'll check for others. With your ability to set a scene and let a yarn spin out, I think you ought to write something longer, maybe a short novel. I think it would be a winner!

Isn't it amazing how being on the ocean always seems to bring out the best hormones in a women and they become abandoned. Loved your story - well written & would love to be able to read the sequel of the following year's cruise with the 4 women involved. Keep up the excellent work. Cheers

Great stuff

Would have been nice if he and Brandy got together ...

Well executed and some decent repartee as well for a bonus

This was just fun. Some erotic and some sex, but alot of fun. The Captain and Brandy discovered some things about themselves. Brandy had a good time with Wanda and Marylin teasing him to get him primed for the coming evening. This wasn't romance and it wasn't just an anonymous fuck either. They had come on this cruise to have fun and they did and at the end made plans for the next year too. I think he needs to start drinking protein shakes or smoothies and working out several times a week to prepare for the next season. Especially if there are going to be four women to keep happy.

sex rocks. Fuck you annony! I gave it a 5

I'm interested in seeing where this guy's life goes in that year. :)

The perfect mix of story and sex.

Thank You

Dear Author, Thanks for the fun tale. Makes me wish I owned a boat! 5* all the way. jntiques

Looking forward to “COTJG, Pt 2. Not sure if it will be a year later or when his 1st Mate corners him? Good read!!

Fun read. I love sailboats and sailing. The characters were well thought out with believable emotions. The sex was good, too.

****Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Will not rate, as I had no idea Marilyn and Wanda were basically bi/swingers, and neither things are my cup of coffee. Will try another one of your stories, as I've enjoyed every other one I've read.

Did he really turn Brandy down? Good grief!!!!

You did a great job with this story I have read a lot of stories but this one was outstanding.thank you very much for sharing the story (and the Ladies)

Good one, sexy and funny.

Next cruise?

Trapped on a sailing ship with some hot to trot females! The sacrifices a man must make to earn a living.

5

wow. So hot. I loved that story

Just great I loved it I could smell the sex and sea

Cripes, talk about every man's dream!!

Hot AND funny!

Excellent story, loved reading it, sailing sounds like fun. Reading about having sex while sailing seems to add a little more rocking and rolling to the mix as well as heightening the experience and excitement.

Well done. Utterly believable story, brilliantly fleshed out; superbly written. The characterisations

were fully developed. We were right there. Voyeurs all, and loving it. The language was crisp.

The descriptions of sex had me reaching for my own. They should have 6 stars ratings.

Really enjoyed this. The descriptions and the dialogue was excellent..it certainly got me hard..thank you.

I thought these two ladies were supposed to show up in his life again next year, he should be so lucky. Fun story, thank you.