All Comments on 'Cruising the Cruise'

Well written thank you

needs 2 b a part 2 please

This story needs to continue, more please!

I gave you 5 stars and wish i could have given you more. This was a fantastic story, more chapters please. thank you. Tina

Great stuff. So well-written

Wow.

What happened? You suddenly realised lunchbreak was nearly over and just had to finish the story?

The plot had been laid yet the chance to play with it gave way to brevity, and whoosh it was all over. Not that I am against short stories, but in this case it felt like something important was missing.

The part where she had sex with the man was... interesting. Can't say it worked for me, it certainly didn't ring true in my mind, but then I never took up those offers of money to screw men; closest I got was an offer of about a tenth of what she got for me to deprive the bride of her husband-to-be's virginity at a drunken stag do, which I declined.

Is there any element of your story that actually happened to you? If it is then I hope it isn't the death of a partner.

Lexi