All Comments on 'Crystal Clear Ch. 02'

one more chapter of excellent erotic writing from Romantic1. I wonder how many of us sign on daily to Literotica.com/newstories and scroll down looking for "Crystal Clear"?

Although, I guess, we also did that on "Road Trip" and some of the others that R1 has given his readers.

The Eagle also once again gives it 5* and 2 talons up.

The Eagle still flies west of the Mason-Dixon.

Just a question, are you undetermined on the length of this series? Or do you have the number of chapters laid out?

Excellent as always, thank you.

Val

I check my e-mail every day hoping for another chapter of "Crystal Clear"....and I was a happy 70 year old this morning. Better than the little blue pill.

Like the previous comments. You do such a good job I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks

But what a nice one. Forced to choose between Crystal and Ellen?

This should be interesting.

But surely some way will be found to make sure this remains a threesome--or more.

Glad to see you back ... and above par. As Always.

Yessss! Welcome back RR and Mr. Mellon! I'm really happy to see one of my favorite authors back in full form. As usual, there a interesting twist in this episode! How will Jim cope with BOTH Crystal and Ellen? How will Crystal react? Don't know about you folks, but I'm eager for the next chapter in Jim&Crystal life.

I sense a hint of polyamory.

Glad to see more of this series starring Jim, Crystal, Ellen and the rest of the crew.The potential problems starting to appear is this chapter just add some more "spice" to the situation. Future chapters are going to be interesting to sat the least...

Romantic1you have gone and done it again, grand slam home run that deserves a minum of 10 stars but we only get to give you 5... These Literotica folks are so stingy with the ratings.... LOL

I see another chapter already, great!!

Myassisdragin

Really enjoy your stories! Thanks.

1* !!

Love the interplay and the story...and of course...the sex!

Probably one of the worst shit on Lit !! 1* !

This my second reading of the whole series and it is just as entertaining as before!!!

Jealousy will find a way to the forefront. Crystal appears to be more free with others than Ellen. Hope he picks Ellen first mate...