by Romantic1
It just keeps getting better and better. I really enjoy the way you teel the story and the lessons you impart. Thank you
This is really pathetic effort at a stroke story. Tallentless and hard to read.
Your attention to detail is amazing but I have to point out one minor opportunity you missed to incorporate an odd detail. From Indianapolis to I-94 they would have traveled on I-69. I'm sure you could have incorporated that detail into an event.
Absolutely love the way you have ended the last couple of stories...on to Ch. 10!