All Comments on 'Crystal Clear Ch. 22'

The Eagle!

Another great chapter....

WHEN CAN WE GET THE NEXT FIX. I FOUND THIS STORY ESTERDAY AND READ ALL OF IT, I LOVE THE WAY YOU FIND WAYS TO ADD NEW PEOPLE TO THE MIX. DID I READ RIGHT THAT JIM HAS ANOTHER CHILD ON THE WAY?

Very nice addition to the story! Loved it!

Thank you for sharing your story with us!

And it still keeps Cumming! Thanks.

As usual Jim comes to the rescue of another "damsel in distrss", not that this one was in serious trouble....

I keep wondering how many more women Jim can keep up with, he is going to kill himself yet BUT what a way to go out.... LOL

Keep up the fantastic writing, still need to get Lit to allow more stars...

I enjoyed R1's latest release but...

I was expecting Jim having to rescue PJ from assault by a pack of peevish Ninja Taliban-Kamikaze Hellhound biker gang. Souvenir t-shirts on sale in the lobby.

Better luck next time!

It's become slightly predictable, I'd love to see Crystal playing the heroine or a change, or a pair of bisexual men join their circle.... Just something other than Jim saves the day/ another woman joins the group..... Still good and we'll written but for one error, Summer had baby Crystal ages ago and in this chapter you said she was still pregnant.... Also there's been no talk with Crystal avoid the possibility of him making a baby with Edie...

God,so much drivel and wasted space ! 1* of course.

A nice sensual interlude with the continuing drama your story carries. Even the anonymous critics can't stay away and read EVERY chapter...maybe we should call it dazzling and delightful "drivel"...LOL

another 5 star chapter. well-written, sexy, and a lot of fun to read. looking forward to reading more.

Wonderful, lots of cunniligus,love it as a lead in to the insertion of the cock. Just love giving the woman at least two orgasms with my tongue prior to feeding her my cock into her dripping cunt, dribbling a mouth full of her cunt juice into her mouth as I slide my cock in. Followed by her having my cream pie licked out of her by her girl friend who I am now vigorously fucking the brains out of. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.