by Romantic1
That was magnificent and even better than your other other-worldly efforts. That last scene with Kim was so good...
I missed the month in between Jim's vacation and Christmas but I can only hope you never stop writing this series. I'd also forgotten who PJ was and had to read ch. 22 again.
The love, passion, caring and touching in this one is best described as sensually sublime!!!!! I love reading the MASTER!
my only question is: how does this end? could be a lot of unhappy women!!
I don't think it has an ending. It really needs a purpose and plot before it can have an ending. Containing no reason for except for more women to be fucked there can be no end. The story can just keep going. He will eventually run out of seed and just become a seedless water Mellon.
I just feel sorry for the big losers like his sister and sister in law. Why havent they become full time part of his household.
He also needs to start getting more little bastards around the place. All that sperm he throws around wastefully.