by TiberiusPrime
Nice story. Just way to much storytelling and to little dialogue but thats fine. Maybe a ch2 detailing some of their sexy adventures together? How Laura, Ashley and Brenda use Dan their maid for their pleasure? Especially Brenda
wow, if there are 10 stars I would give it. If someone is a bully, they need to learn a lesson. I hate cuck, but this is different.
Though cucking or being cucked isn't my cup of tea, i enjoyed this story 👍 i myself was bullied so reading about cuck dan getting his comeuppance was really satisfying.
It's well written but is a little fast paced. But it had potential to be a multi part story if you hadn't finished it here
Well done, but I don't know if I would have kept Dan around. If Ash was enjoying that big cock as much as Laura, wouldn't there be confraultations between them that you would have to settle. After buying Dan's businesses, Dan could have left town with enough money to start over somewhere else. If this was proofed., it wasn't a good b. Keep writing.
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