by Sputnik57
What a wonderful delight to see a new story from one of my very favorites writers! The cruelty shown to Reed by Lydia and her dominant friends was exquisite, leaving me very excited at the thought of being able to witness such an event through your well crafted words. Thank you!
My humiliation and emasculation at the hands of my wife started as soon as she discovered my love of crossdressing. this story pushed all my buttons. Thank you.
Thanks sputnik, the first and last few lines confirmed it's "up" to your usual standard. A very well deserved 1* for effort, unfortunately not results.
Nonsense. The divorce papers are served faster than the whore can think. I know that a lot of nonsense arises in the dreamland of horniness, but if there is no reference to reality, then a story is just laughable!
Not one of your best
I’m finding writing this comment difficult because I’ve always enjoyed your stories and your writing style. But this one seems to have been written by two people and swings backwards and forwards between two styles. I feel you could have done with an editor or certainly have a beta reader look at it before submission. I found it difficult to read, not because of the story itself, but because of the way it’s been presented.
If it had been your first story I would have said good plot idea and timeline, lacking in delivery, keep writing and I’m sure you will improve.
I’m sorry but there’s no point in making a comment if it’s not an honest one. I hope you’ll read this comment as constructive because that’s the way it’s intended. I haven’t voted.
Gosh, the drivel in this story and then some of your admirers comments are just cringe worthy.
yeah the surprise can be both hot and rage inducing. I would never have gone along since it was all vanilla at home. I would have had issues with my wife being gone weekly