All Comments on 'Cupcakes Ch. 01-02'

i think this is a good story so far. i donot find it cheesey i think it is cute. i can not wait to read more...trs

I think it's a really good start to a story and just different enough from other Were stories to make it refreshing. Please keep writing.

I really want to know what happens next. How does the date turn out?

Keep going! Liked it a lot!

Thank you for the encouragement! I was so nervous about putting my writing out here, so the kind words are most welcome. I especially appreciate the mention that it is a bit different, because I'm trying to subvert a few common themes. It will stick to a lot of cliche, because that's what we all love right? Werewolves and fated mates and some tension and resolution. But hopefully I can also be just a tad different.

Very good start and, a little different than the run of the mill stories.

Great story so far! I like the the way you opened this story!!! Keep them coming

Sweet, lighthearted.

I'm looking forward to more.

I just submitted chapter 3! Chapter 4 is pretty much fine and about to go to my reviewers. I could use another person to preview and give their critique, let me know if you are interested.

I gave it a 5