All Comments on 'Cupcakes Ch. 06'

by KindAsCake

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yay!

I was so excited when I saw a new chapter. Great work. Great story. Can't wait for the next one :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great chapter

Really like this story, used to check a couple times a week for the next chapter. Glad it's finally here! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

KindAsCakeKindAsCakeover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Chapter 7 is done and being edited, it's about twice this long. I hit a block but I'm over it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Brilliant!

This is truly such a wonderful story! Unlike anything I've read before, yet it hits all of those spots that I love. I can't wait to read more of their story soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
amazing

Jason is a jerk......pls keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dragged

Drag is a regular verb, the past tense is dragged, not drug, although drug is an accepted colloquialism often used in the southern US states.

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOover 7 years ago
*****

I'm so enjoying this Story, i loved how you wrote the children in the previous chapter I hope you involve them more their innocent curiosity was adorable 'Out of the mouths of babes'... Jason is an A grade ass, total busybody sucking up for brownie points from the Alpha, one of those ppl everyone has in their life that doesn't like to see ppl getting ahead.

I also like your werewolf concept its refreshing & new... and you still have all the bases cover, the Love Story & the Magic... Well done you!

Very rarely do I comment but I never fail to vote ... 5 stars well earned!

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