All Comments on 'Cupid, Draw Back Your Bow!'

That was a fun erotic read

5stars

Good story!

5

Much better than the other cupid stories you have written. A few minor mistakes in the writing but overall a good story.

A god from Roman mythology? You can do better than that. This should have been classified as sci-fi/fantasy or nonhuman.

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Mucho Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

This was a significant departure from the other similarly themed tale.

Fun read but probably not in the right genre. The interaction between husband and wife was supposedly the "romance" part but was grossly overshadowed by sex. Not criticizing, per se, just not a great fit for this category. There were enough discrepancies in their experiences, despite Cupid's fuzzifying, to make a fun follow-up story some day. 4.1*