All Comments on 'Cyber Mittens'

I love this series... OMW, Nina and Samantha are so Hilarious, Sexyliscious, Cute and Unique... In a class of their own. Together they are Magic..... Pure Hotness and Provocative with their come hither attitudes LoL

**I LOVED IT**

High Voltage Mittens? ..... sure to be SCORCHING HOT, like it's predecessors..LoL

Oooh, Can't wait!!!

Thank you

I think I laughed more than I got off, I loved it, I'd love to chat with you guys sometime if possible.

get back to writing the REAL story.

I mean, yeah, these shorts are like the pixar shorts, thye're cute and cuddly, but give us the serious stuff where sam and nina get to actually meet and play.

I do love these girls, the mix of hot and nerdy is adorable. I LOVED Mittens, and schrodingers Mittens was fun as a segue for the next part...but I guess I don't love reading this style of writing. Since I smiled almost the whole time I was reading it I did give it 5 stars, but I would actually agree with the commenter that requested you go back to the original style. Samantha seems to have embraced her role, Nina must be happy... But it would be nice to know their thoughts, how their love and commitment are developing.

I love this series! Really enjoy the easy, conversational style of your writing. The banter between these two is amazingly funny, sexy and sweet. Both Sam and Nina are very relatable and I can't wait to see what adventures they get into.

Thanks for posting! I look forward to the next installment.

I really like the series so far, looking forward to more. /me is a special one-in-twenty-kind--of-person.

I am loving the whole series short and long! Keep it coming ;)

Was reading this at work to pass the time with no one around. The pancake part at the intro had me laughing so hard I had to set my phone down and grip my sides. Good thing no one was around to notice or I'd have some explaining to do. Love the humor in your series, but that joke really takes the pancake.

Amazing, as usual. Nearly hyperventilated and died of laughter when Nina got her new rabbit tail.. MORE. Thank you please. :)

the chemistry between these two is amazing, and these stories have been amazing every time, i can't wait for high voltage mittens

Quite simply, I have given you a 5/5 due to outstanding work here on this story as well as an attempt to "buy"/ encourage you to gives what we want!!!

...pancaaaakesss.....

Hot buttered pancakes, smothered in syrup. Let the drooling commence.

Wait a second....is that like some sort of metaphor for butt sex?

Does the carrot erotica represent some sort of Electra complex?

Does pointy-headed pseudo-intellectual ultracrepedarianism annoy you as much as it does my readers?

...........

And where are those damn mittens you keep promising? You are being {ahem} tardis in fulfilling our trope kink.

Love, love, love the characters that have been developed. Endearing, amusing, adorable!

I usually don't enjoy the idea of cyber sex but you somehow managed to make it super hot, love how Sam took control of the situation, brilliant job as always, can't wait for the next installment! Seriously well written, it's so hard to find stories on here that have such a wonderful combination of sex, humour and romance.

Don't move! Keep your hands where I can see them! Now back away-- slowly-- from those pancakes, and return to your keyboard... No, leave the forks behind... Now, keep backing up, and turn slowly towards the laptops.

Assume the writing position! You know what it is-- one down, one up-- assume the position, and return to writing the story! No more of this "Check back in a month or two" bull, or things will have to get ugly.

[You write too well to delay 'High Voltage' any longer, so please! write more quickly! Perfectly Pronounced' is probably a fine thing (except for its obvious problem... the fact that it hasn't been finished and posted yet), but you don't want to be known for making unkept promises. (And, you probably write too well to limit yourself to erotica. Have you considered more mainstream fiction, and possibly a publisher?)

Cheers-- Pai dosGatos]

..please please please finish the next part, I SO can't wait!

Keep going, these are amazing stories. I love the realism of the relationship you've built up over the stories so far... cant wait for the next instalment

Love this. The banter is funny and the sexy things are indeed sexy (who'd guessed). Awesome work

I adore their dynamic, and the obvious affection, and the fleshed-out characters. I read all three of these in one go (quickly retiring to my bunk as I did so), and am now going to be eagerly awaiting the next installment of this 'verse. ;)

Yet another fantastic Mittens edition. The only letdown with finishing it is knowing that it might take a while for a new one.

Fantastic stories! Just found them on Lit. and read all 3. Love your characters, can't wait to learn more about them and what they get up to next. They remind me a little of Sunstone on deviantart. Way to represent the lesbiyinz :-) Also, "Jenny's" pancakes are kinda like sex.

I like you a lot, Nina; but I must confess to being half in love with Samantha. If (strike that) WHEN this continues I am sure I will have fallen totally in love. I know, Samantha, that you are totally committed to Nina, but I hope you two don't mind that you have admirers out here.

Please keep making installments or I will wither away, unable to eat or sleep.

With Love to you both,

RPGer

Founding Member of Romantics Anonymous

We need more mittens. It's been too long, and withdrawal is setting in. I LOVE the writing, the style, the tone...and Nina and Sam, too. MORE MITTENS! Wait, what about the pancakes? Lol

MORE MITTENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's been over a year since the last installment appeared. I have to guess that there won't be any more episodes. That's too bad because I was really into it. The characters and story and dialog are really good.

Please bring back more mittens. *hopeful look*

I like your humor and characters well enough, but cannot get the thought out of my head that this plays out as the cleverest, wittiest approach to the grooming of an at-risk personality ever. I didn't vote since I couldn't separate my reaction from your writing quality, so a low vote wouldn't be fair to you, so I am just commenting...AQ

High voltage mittens is on amazon, if anybody is wondering where the other section is

Not enough pancakes

I just read the first 3 installments of Mittens, and I must say it's the best I've read (thus far) and hope to read many more funny, sexy, heartwarming, entertaining, cumlicious stories from you ladies. (I assume there are 2 of you) You have made an instant and (hopefully) lifelong fan!!! Keep them cumming!

Mittens had the hottest domination i've ever read in it. I was reeeeaaally hopin for some more. Not jus comedy 8(

You guys are so good at this! I've not had the time to sit and just read this story so I've spent all day reading a few lines here and there.....I have discovered that if you do that, you tend to end up with wet panties and needing to explain to your girlfriend why they're so wet after spending the day shopping....

Butt (hehe).....totally worth it!

Not enough pancakes

OMG!!! The visual I got from Sam's story telling.... Heck, I damn near came from that! (Big blush). Heading for the next part !!

I've read three installments of Mittens the past three nights and let's just say it's definitely been worth the lack of sleep! ;)

Exactly the right number of carrots

Loved this addition. However, I don't think there were enough pancakes 😝 I'm really looking forward to the next addition!!

Loved it would read it again.

So love this, reminds me of my partner and myself when one of us is away :)

I love this pair of girls. such fun :)

I loved this, the easy, chatty style of your writing. The banter is amazing; funny, sexy and lovely. Adore both Sam and Nina.

Kaboom! Explosive erotica; I love the easy back & forth flow of events, & no shortage of loving sex, very hot & personal; so thankful to share it with you & your characters! Please, keep writing more! You are in my favourites, of course!

still check in with this account every so often to see if we finally get MITTENS. swear to god Ive been reading these stories roughly annually for maybe 5 years. great stuff.

Adored it! And now I can't get the lyrics of Caroline Martin's "Look at me" out of my head (it has to be one of the sexiest songs about surrender out there).

Look at me, wild fox

Quietly waiting for you

I am sitting behind the mesh

Only the hungry break through

You can burrow underneath

While the farmer's asleep

I am young tender rabbit meat

Take me home for you tea

Oh, yeah, please.