All Comments on 'Cynthia's Moon Ch. 04'

This was a great chapter to read sad, but good. Awww... I feel so bad for Cynthia. Wondering when she'll get the happiness she deserved. Please update more soon & hope the next chapter would be longer!

I JUST CAUGHT SOMETHING , HE IS A POTENTIAL ALPHA, I DO THINK, AND I THINK THAT HIS BROTHER KNOWS THAT MARKUS IS STRONGER THAN HIM, MY GUESS, SO NOW WE HAVE THREE OR MORE GROUPS/INDIVIDUALS TRYING TO HEEP THEM APART THIS COULD GET VERY COMPLICATED QUICKLY, AND HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON

Wow, I am surprised he acted the way he did. I don't understand why she didn't explain. I can't wait to know what Karus hasn't told him. And what did the red eyes mean. I guess things will go from bad to worse when daddy gets there tomorrow. Why did Markus fight Val's challenge if he was dropping her off on her ass anyhow?

For a guy patient enough to watch her for a year and not mate with her when they were hot and heavy all those times, why was he not patient enough to hear an explanation. Afterall, if things were so intense between them, wouldn't he want a chance to fix it? I'd avoid a guy with a temper like that. I think he got too nasty at the end.

Interested in seeing where this goes but I hope it isn't too drawn out and painful to watch them.

cannd

I don't like the way he acted at all but with the little tidbits we got in this one, I have a feeling the next chapter is going to be very interesting.

Can not wait for the next chapter to come out...

I'll bet that Markus curses himself all night. If he doesn't, then he's an idiot.

next please

and wanting more. They came so close to being together.......i want them to be together. What is the secret that Karus and Sara are keeping from Markus? How will it effect his relationship w/Cynthia?

I eagerly await the next chapter!

When are u posting another

you can't just leave us hanging when it gets exciting. please write more!

markus should let them have her she is a slut