All Comments on 'Dad Dies in Industrial Accident'

A bit wacky but I like it, now we need to know what they can get up to in a lovely warm place like the Caribbean.

QUICK READ, THAT ALL FOLKS.

IT'S SO FUCKED UP, IT'S FUNNY.

BUT THE READ WAS OK.

You have got to add more to the story.

Great story.. You need to continue this. Maybe another chapter.

Liked it but it was a bit short and it's been years since you wrote this so there most not be more a 4