by Momstheboss
This is a wonderfully well written story, full of erotica and lust and love.
I'm soo glad I found you and I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings.
She is probably competing with her mother for the male cock to declare an emergency as well: take a break from the farm chores and the boys. It seems that farmers have a good insurance program. But it never worked out like that and she ended up replacing the mother without being able to declare an emergency. Well told.
Ella seems to have resigned her fate to her present environment, which unfortunately is the way of life out in "farm country". One is born on the farm, works 24/7/365, no vacations, no sick days, no "oh, I have a back ache", or "I don't feel good" and one day you just up and die!!!
All in all it is a rather sad story; it's tugging on my heart strings now! I do really feel bad for Thomas Ella and her two boys, and ????? IS IT ANN or IS IT AMY?????, Thomas' wife, Ella's mother and the two boy's Grandmother.
I know the story is fiction (not true), but God Bless you Thomas, Ella and her two boys and Amy or Ann. And all farmers, their families, and farm workers.
Ich habe alle drei Teile der Gescchichte hintereinander gelesen, ohne zwischendurch einen Kommentar abzugeben, denn man soll den Tag nicht vor dem Abend loben. Es war spannend und ich konnte nicht aufhören zu lesen. Trotz einiger langatmiger Passagen wurde die Story nie langweilig.
Ich hoffe auf eine Fortsetzung.
This story is not far from real, it is actually close to my own real story.
Great story I enjoyed the teasing story line keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. To top it all off you left room to continue the story leaving the younger boys coming to age. So if you chose to continue you could. As a writer to a writer a taboo subject as this I would. Anyway momknowsbest I'll be looking for your other stories I hope they are as great as this one
Well done Momstheboss. I greatly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing the story.
Warren
You do have a wonderful, straightforward style. You tell these stories about incest between a grown woman and her father in such a clear manner without any unnecessary shameful or romantic furbelows. Just two healthy people working out their sexual lives as adults. This is very rare indeed for this site and I do commend you for it. Having seen your biography makes your work doubly valuable for me.
Well written and tender , you reminded me of the rhythm of farm living and loving.