by dannyboy111
This was written as if it could wrap up this amazing series, but I truly hope there is still more to come. ("...and cum and cum and cum...")
Cant wait to read the next chapter if there is one.
I have been hanging for this installment
This chapter was perfect. I don't usually get wood reading but this had me rock hard. Hope you can keep it going a little longer but please never add a fourth person.
Hope I'm wrong but that sounded like a summation at the end meaning it was the last chapter. I really liked the slow build up and the teasing, also liked where it was starting to go and hoping it would continue. I would love to see more from this series.
Like I've said before - I love your writing. Thought the earlier chapters were the best but still fantastic! I think you should leave this one here and move onto the next...
Well done!!
My favourite story I've read and would be a fantastic ending to the series. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
A wonderful story and well constructed. Good development of characters and I do hope there are more to follow
And wouldn't you know it? When I reassembled the door the damn doorknob and latch worked perfectly.
Why not just daughter?
The Stepdaughter bit totally removes the Taboo from the story!
I love the interchangeability at the end. Neither girl is named, so identity is removed. I also very much like your sense of humor, and more so your timing. Excellent pacing. A well written, sexy tale. Very good work.
I really enjoyed your story. I loved the pace of your story, no matter what other may have said.
what a ride ! True, it became a bit silly towards the end.. but what can I say, a man can dream !
Well, I just read all 12 parts, and now I'm going to take my own Daddy to bed and make sure he's happy
Of course I won't tell him why I'm horny... it's better he just gets the benefit
A overall good story, thanks.
Just a word or three ;) to help improve for many of us. I'm not sure you wrote this for US or YOURSELF , but it is obvious you are obsessed with LARGE BREASTS, so much so it was getting a little thick, we got the point by page 2 , they both have HUGE
TITS....... for the 50% of your readers that are NOT breast centered your obsession was evident......... didn't kill the story, but it did come close......
Thoroughly enjoyed the series. The ending, with the door knob: nice finish!
I was hoping there would be more tit-fucking and big tit worship throughout the story. After all, you kept describing their luscious breasts but they hardly ever contributed to the pleasure itself, only to tease.
In any case, that was the only thing I would've done differently. This was an incredibly erotic story and I hope you keep writing!
I really enjoyed this series. I loved the detail you put into describing their lingerie but I wish you had added in high heels. That would've completed the look. I absolutely loved how cock addicted they became. If you decide to continue this series, maybe add in a pregnancy for the step daughter or maybe have her bring a friend home.
Please keep writing this story! It is amazing!! He still hasnt fucked Krissys ass!
Agree that daughter rather than step would have added to the taboo factor. Also agree adding heels to the outfits would add to the story. Lastly, I wish it transitioned into mother-daughter sex.
This was a great series, i partivularly liked the fact that you refrained from a mistake many other make, that is : Pilling up bodies on top of each other, daugheters friend, guys neghibours, the wifes gym instructor and dog trainer etc.
Also the fact that you decided against mixing in a whole line fetishes like high heels, pregnancy, etc etc realy kept the story from falling into the ridiculous and stupid, the exaggerations at times tended to be a bit too much but it was still acceptable
All in all, great work
Well-crafted characters can carry off complexity, and handle development as well as conflict. Well-done indeed. My first favour.
Not sure how many times I've read this now and that is strange for me I'm not a repeat reader usually. And what's funnier is I wind up reading the whole thing everything lol. Thanks for keeping it in the family, the 3 charaters were all that was needed. I'm also a fan of your straight up UT steamy sex scenes as well. Thanks for sharing.
I can't believe I'm going to say this but... this is the Finest, sexiest storyline ever told! Thank you! You are a terrific writer.
Awesome story line. Only thing better would have been it was my real lifestory. Get them cumming.