by dirtyjoe69
on putting out boring stuff like this? Less than a page of ooo's and ahh's don't make a story. You should look at the amazing piece someone wrote about lamps as a point of reference for what writing on this site should be. Especially the illustrated. Yours should be burned.
stick a perfectly healty cock in a hole full of shit
You must wonder about the writers who use all the OOOOOO's and ahhhhhhh they have no ability to describe the feeling. Which makes you wonder if the women they are with are getting any good feelings. all these 3 part stories wouldn't even make a decent length story. I dont see how someone can get their rocks off by then time your hart your trying to find the next story
First of all.. during anal sex, the anus is not full of shit, actually the only time it is is when you have to take a Crap :\
And about the story.. It was.. okay.. enough to kinda get off on, but not engaging in the least bit, I mean.. you're first chapter was actually kinda good, then it degenerated.
those who make comments like this is crazy have never had real anal sex, drop dead you bunch of dummys this is great work so let it be.
Glad this story ended with the father cumming all of his daughters holes!
Suggestion, you should come up with another story and have the daughter fuck the dad with a strapon. That would be hot!
This makes me want an anal experience even more...with someone I can call my daddy