All Comments on 'Daddy's Cock Forever!'

But that's the problem, you've obviously put a hell of a lot of effort into this, and it shows. But the detail, and the exposition overwhelms the action in the story. The actoon is well-written, but who the hell discusses obscure Christian sects as they're barrelling towards an inter-family incestuous fuck-fest?

Bizarrely the relationships and motivations were okay. I - as a reader - could accept them, but the way they unfolded was so slow. Perhaps less 'talking', and more succinct sentences. I will read more of this, if you write about them.

Especially to us Catholics

Definitely not one of your best by a long chalk !!!

Since when are most Ubers Saturns and not Priuses (Prii?)?

because I was reading the same stories over and over. I come back after a year and almost every story I read is a novelette. 3 to 6 pages in lenhgt, and so much non erotic detail. I admit I was tired of the old obligatory description of a 7" - 9" cock as big around as a beer can, but now these stories are more detailed then a sexy paperback book. some like this one is written well but damn, this belongs under novels, it was well into the 3rd page before any hint of sex happened. Where are the stories that introduce you to the characters and get on with business?

Well that literally turned into a cluster fuck!! I was liking the story up until the wine cell crap happened.

At times a little difficult to follow, but made me hard and horny.

I disagree with others. Excellent story. Loved the group family sex.

Who started the infidelity, Mom or Dad?

Both loved each other, both just wanted an open marriage.

Bringing the stepbrother in was good.

The big surprise was the eunuch Father and pervert.

Glad to Daughter and Mom sharing Dad.

The premise of a father fucking his daughter, the mother fucking her son, the wife fucking her stepbrother, and another father licking his son's ass while the son is fucking his wife should make for a very hot story. But you take so long to get to the juicy parts that the story becomes boring. Cut out the philosophical discourses and make the story more direct.

Long, boring & unrealistic dialogue. Each person gives a speach with their over reasonings

Wow, what a wicked web we weave. This story is the true epidemy of a fucked up family.

WHAT A FUCKED UP STORY IS THIS!! UTTER WASTE OF TIME, GARBAGE