All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Gymnast Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hope you write part 3

The first two were excellent!

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
ANother FANTASTIC story.

We need a third chapter and an awesome threesome

ChalkyCanberra1970ACTChalkyCanberra1970ACTover 7 years ago
Dayam AGAIN

Thanks Nikki 😉

EnglishMuffinsEnglishMuffinsover 7 years ago
10

Another great read. Like everyone else, I can't wait for the story to continue.

Please keep writing. You're very talented.

alicia08alicia08over 7 years ago
fantastic

Really sexy story my imagination was racing as i read each line with my erection as hard as it has ever been

No1holywoodNo1holywoodover 7 years ago
Good

Makes a good read. Would like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Such an erotique story ...

Wowww, ohh my gosh ... you did such an incredible job to write this story ... Please go on and write some more... Mabe with a a young male ballet-dancer and his mom or older sister ...

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 7 years ago
Holy Wow!!!

Man, I sure hope you plan on making more chapters of this!!! One of the best I've read. Since a 10 is the highest you can score in gymnastics and 5 stars is as high as you can score here, that makes your score a 15. lol

MaryAndersonMaryAndersonabout 7 years ago
We leave this tale with Audra's mind

"spinning with plans and possibilities" for future sexual adventures with her daddy and her gymnast buddies. Whether or not you choose to let us know what comes next or leave it to our imaginations, thank you Nikki_2021 for this good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Terrific

Nikki, I hope you had a mind to go on. if not, thanks for this really cool spring time story!

Lee2012Lee2012over 3 years ago

Hell of a story! Had me drooling at the image and this wasn’t illustrated 🤦‍♂️

blackknight314blackknight314almost 3 years ago

Great! Thanks for sharing.

RuckinLguardRuckinLguardover 2 years ago

Great story, but it would benefit from a proof reading before being posted. There are a couple of times where you mixed up Audra and Misty's names.

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 1 year ago

Like the idea, but still feels rushed, and Doug really didn't clear any "hurdles" to taking Audra's friend, which takes away from it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow what would I not give to fuck and suck these two sexy teen aged cunts, one one and two on one. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Damn that was hot stuff. Yes, it did feel a little rushed, but I think when you consider that Misty has expressed desire to fuck Audra's dad for quite some time, it was easy enough to overcome any reservations she may have had, especially when she's so damn horny (remember Audra built her up and left her kind of hanging earlier, that devious little minx). It was hot that she let him cum in her - I bet Audra was super jealous of that. Poor girl sounds like she doesn't get the pleasure she deserves, especially with that useless Gary (why girls stick with idiots that long when they clearly don't give them what they need, I'll never know). Hopefully dad and Audra will give her everything she's been after and they can enjoy a lovely threesome together, and who knows, perhaps something more.

SatyrDickSatyrDick4 months ago

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Hawt 'n' Spicy!

Buuut this line struck me as unintentionally funny:

-She sat back in her car seat, mind spinning with plans and possibilities.-

The image that I got in my head due to her being a gymnast, was a child in a car booster) seat.

LightninrodLightninrod18 days ago

Believable story and characters, normal people with normal desires. Much better than your brother/sister story was.

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December 2023 Wow, time flies when you're busy. You'll be pleased to know I am still writing, just struggling to find the time. I have posted a new story for you, Outback Affairs. Its about a family in remote Australia finding love ... with each other. Keep an eye out and I h...

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