All Comments on 'Daddy's Sunshine Pt. 04'

Me personally, I wouldn't spend a penny on a lawyer for the soon to be exwife, unless it was to get her the maximum sentence!

And how good of a friend is MacKenzie? Good enough that she might want to be included in the fun and excitement of daddy and sunshine's new life together?

And the idea of daddy getting his daughter pregnant is excellent! I know it added to the relationship between me and my daughter when her mom left us for a younger and what she originally thought to be a way richer than me guy. She quickly signed the divorce papers and made a point of telling our daughter that she didn't have time to take care of a 16 yr old girl. We were very careful until Kris turnned 18. My Christmas present from my daughter that year was her telling me she was pregnant with my baby. Less than a year later, her best friend Casey moved in with us to help take care of our twin girls. It wasn't long before Casey was pregnant too.

This series is terrific! I want more!

Charleston and Sunshine need to always remain together in love. Do not ruin it by adding other females. Unless you add other men for her to fully enjoy. Fair is fair. As for her getting pregnant. She should. Let them enjoy what that thing that is her mother took. Let them have a family. Just please don't include other women. Let this remain an epic love story.

I am so happy there is a new chapter and I am eagerly awaiting the next. Please, please, don't add McKenzie in with them. Keep her separate.

Please let the father and daughter have a baby, they're a great couple.

Love this story!! But I love it just Charleston and Shayenne. I think their love is great and could be perfect just the two of them.

Waiting for next chapter....very excited!

No to threesome. Just let it be sunshine and her daddy. More fucking. And i wish he got her pregnant. Can't wait for the next part.

I agree, no threesome. Keep the love with just them

I love the story. Not crazy about the wife part but life is usually messy! More chapters please! TYVM!

Hi, I really like your work and am definitely interested in helping you write future chapters. Or at the very least borrowing some characters for a collab.

Thank you, everyone, for reading the Daddy's Sunshine series. It means the world to me that you not only take the time to read each chapter, but that you also comment and vote. Your time is the most precious gift you can give to me!

Chapter 5 is already in the works and, trust me, I've heard you all loud and clear. I will not be adding McKenzie in to the mix. She's getting her own series once I'm finished with this one. (Don't panic! I'm not sure when the Sunshine saga will be ending. LoL.)

Someone above mentioned not being crazy about the wife part and I'm sorry about that, but I needed to write her out of their lives. I couldn't just pretend she wasn't a part of the story, anymore; but I'll only be referencing Luna maybe once or twice more and then she will be completely out of this story.

Again, I thank you, all, most sincerely for your time and comments. It means the world to me, as a writer, that you are enjoying my work.

As far as collaborating on a story, I don't see how that's possible. There's email on this site, of course, but my private life is separate from this account and I don't share personal information. Inability to communicate effectively would destroy any possibility of a successful collaboration and I work very hard on my character/storyline development, so I prefer not to share them. I most sincerely thank you for your interest, though, and wish you luck on your future works.

Stay naughty!

~Daddy's Hellion.

really liking the story, but please no 3some.. keep it between her and her daddy....can't wait for part 5

More breeding and i cnat wait for part 5

Like the story and know you are gearing up to impregnating her but hate when stories go there. Put her on the pill and let them enjoy sex, go to college, have kinky fetish sex just please no baby.

Would love more baby aspect. Pregnancy kink is great! Love every bit of the story. Think anal would be super nice to read!

Been reading this series for the 9th time. Hope the next part would be really soon.

Loving this can’t wait for part 5!!!

Fucking love this story... When you will be update? Please update soon..

I love this story. You write very well. I love dad daughter love stories, pregnant, living like a married couple, deliriously happy. No threesomes just let them be in love. Can’t wait for more!!

Love the story. I hope you'll be updating real soon.

This story is amazing. INTENSELY EROTIC, very character driven and emotional. Charleston is so sweet, strong and sexy, daughter is a great heroine. Eagerly waiting for next Pt 5! Also i agree, don’t bring bestfriend threesome into the mix, give her her own series. I think it’s already an intense relationship with taboo elements, to spice it up would vote for voyeur or fetish club material vs introducing a threesome that plays heavily in their relationship. Thank you for your writing!!!

I am so on love with these two, and I really love that she seems to be transtioning into more wife mode. I csnt get enogh of this.

Pls post the part 5 soon

I love this story and I love the series so far, I hope Kenzie catches him going down on his daughter and begs him to breed her as her own father won't.

Wonderful story. Well-written and very hott. Sad to see its been abandoned.

When will you update chapter 5?

Still waiting for your next update

Such loyal little Hellions!!

Was in a car accident and hurt my back, so I was MIA for quite a while; but it thrills me to my bones that you're all still here and waiting for the next chapter.

Part 5 will be posted by the weekend. Promise!

Stay naughty!

~Daddy's Hellion~

Still waiting hope it cums soon 🤤😉

Please give us more!!

Soon! Please??? Dying for an update. And so sorry about your car accident.

And so horny! Cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!

My twisted mind would love them to spend more time at the Club, out on the balcony, in the "viewing room" both viewing and then sharing and maybe some interactions with other Club members. I definitely would like a "breeding" aspect to this story as well.

Can't wait for the next installment!!

I agree not threesome. The two have something special and I think part 5 should be them coming together not adding someone new. I love the reading, but it should be more about the pure love they share. Big fan

Still waiting on part 5 ...

Still waiting ...

you are probably done with this tale, well written, well paced,,the girls decision to have a baby was sophomoric and appeals only to a select few of the male readers,,she has only just discovered the world of sex and there is that special apartment at the fetish house to explore,,which you haven't touched on,,,only a chapter about the girl friend. liked it though, read it all in one sitting,,

omg hellion, I hope you're alright. I know that must've been really scary. ://

Awesome story - keep it coming. Daddy has to get Sunshine pregnant as welk as McKenzie, both at the same time!

We need another chapter and no you don't need to add Mackenzie to their love let her father get her pregnant I like their story as well. Hurry with the next chapter.

Thank you to everyone who has left comments, both good and critical. I read them as often as I am able to and take them in to consideration when writing future works.

I have good news for those of you who have been both patiently and impatiently waiting: DADDY'S SUNSHINE PART 5 WILL BE SUBMITTED TONIGHT!

The site will determine when it gets posted, but I will definitely be submitting it tonight. Just finishing up the editing portion. Checking and double-checking things.

Thanks for sticking around all of this time, my naughty little minions!

Means the world.

~Daddy's Hellion. <3

The characters and background is compelling, lots to be excited about for the future of this series!

I mean I understand Luna and can't really blame her. If Charleston force her to have a child she didn't want she can't expect her to be a good mother. I get he wanted to keep them but it's the women's choice at the end of the day. I'm all about pro choice

Good story, but Daddy needs to be her loving father and take the responsibility to get the Plan B pill and an IUD for her. She doesn't need a baby now. She needs to finish college first. Love her enough for that to happen, DADDY!

After a 4* for your previous part, this one earned a full 5* since this is much more loving than pain.

BJ

Assholes siding with lunatic Luna and her abortions.

Let her rot in jail.

Daddy and daughter should move away to have their own life, without fucking McKenzie

Beautiful story of love 😍 🤗 😘

Good part, I like the pro-life stance of the MC's. Now Shayenne needs to become more mature, so that she sees eye to eye with dad ...

Give me pt 5 daddy. and no baby OK Id do anything for you.

GREAT writing !!! Keep it up !!!