All Comments on 'Daddy's Sunshine Pt. 05'

Next chapter should have her getting pregnant by her daddy.

Oh, fuck! I love it. Can't wait for their next love making/fucking

I loved this story I’m so glad you came back to writing it, keep up the great work.

I was beginning to think you weren’t going to continue!! Xoxo

This chapter is definitely hot....but i maybe biased about the first four chapters cause i love them and the dirty talk.This one was a bit mellow but still amazing.Please don’t ever stop writing cause you are amazing!!!!.Looove this title & all your other previous ones. Hope you continue to also write more on the other stories that you’ve written. Thank you for giving us this beautiful story.👍🏻

I’m so happy there’s another chapter!!! Please keep writing them!! I love these two together. So hot

I want the next chapter for Mackenzie. Please update that one next.

Bring on the pregnancy fucking 💦

I'm a huge fan and can't get enough of this series!! Please update again asap!

Your writing insights within me a joy I never knew I was capable of feeling. Yes, I weep.

This is great! I hope you leave it between sunshine and her dad... please don’t add any others to the mix... no threesomes!

This series is one of the best I've ever read! I like the development, and I agree with several other comments -- keep it between Daddy and Sunshine, at least for now. It's only going to get better when Sunshine has her Daddy's baby growing inside her fertile womb ! :-)

I need more! I'm shamelessly addicted. This series is so fucking amazing!

When can we expect the rest 77

Will there be more? I Love it. 5 * on every chapter.

Ive read through HUNDREDS of literotica stories and man this is one of the best! Excitedly awaiting a new chapter!

Cum on, don't leave it like this. The tale is so awesome that I forgot it is supposed to be a stroke story.

More please! Love this!

OMG! I loved this! Please give us more!!! This story must go on!

A glorious, well paced story of much happening in America today. Just as many bad alcoholic women as men. Just hope Dad and Sunshine get married and have beautiful children!!!

Please finish this story. This is one of the better ones on here

Loving the story. When can we see the next entry?

I think it would be great if somehow it comes out that Luna cheated and Charleston is not Sunshines father. That way they can get married and she can give him the kids he wants. Its clear they love each other and they dont need to be separated

Hoping u can update soon.

Still waiting for the next chapter.

This story is thought provoking and yet such a turn on. The descriptions leaving me dripping and then the emotional banter and love just pushes me over the edge. Tbh I would appreciate it if McKenzie wasn't involved sexually because the father daughter bond is too tight, and it leaves no room for additions. I do love the vouyerism and anal that can be added and I'd recommend sex toys for the next one. Looking forward to more great works! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧

Really good read needs more though, maybe including her friend as she sends to really want him to.

Loving the storytelling and character development, so looking forward to more!

To the author of this series, please continue writing this story. This is so awesome. I really love it. I even recommend your page to my colleagues. Please please continue.

I am hoping to read more about these two. The things the two of them do just pushes all the right buttons. Please keep going

So, my little Hellions...

You are all eager for a continuation, are you?

I haven't written in FOREVER. My laptop crashed, had a really bad car accident that I'm still recovering from, and haven't had the time; but here I am...

Should I really write a part 6, though?

~Daddy's Hellion~

Damn I love this story n want it to continue with sunshine giving her father the large family he dream of

You are on a roll, keep it going!

I hope you'll keep going with this! And I'm dying for a sequel of Mckenzie's story as well. Don't stop!

Please please please do part six! Or continue with Mackenzies story!!!!

Yes, pleaaaase. I dying to read part 6 of this story.

Please keep them coming 😉 absolute favourite series on here

I really enjoyed this series. I hope there are more to come. 👍

This by far has been my favorite story thus far...I'm hoping you will eventually continue this.

Mooore!

Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next installment.

Omg fully body shivers

I'm in love with this story and have read it multiple times please continue it! You should make it into a book!

Jesus, Mary, and Joseph...my toes are numb! That was fuckin hot as....cripes! Wow. 5 friggin stars! (Now, to catch my breath)

Can I ask for more?!?! One of the hottest stories I've read!!!

Please please please write more!!! Begging!!!!

Please write more! I want to know how the story ends!

i love it

Omg more, please! I love this series! So freaking sexy!!

I have read and reread this story sooo many times, please please please write part 6. I have to know what happens next, is she pregnant? Do they return to the club? What was the sentence given to the bitch aka the mother.

My favourite thing of all is the way you write about the dad, the fact that he's addicted to her and still seems so fatherly towards her without sounding creepy! So well written, even if you don't write any more chapters (but i really hope you do) thanks for a cracking read👍

Fantastic storyline. Extremely well written. I only hope you decide to continue the series.

Stumbled across this story and LOVE IT!!!

So well written … definitely need more chapters … so work being on this site

We need more, Please continue

Good job, but daddy needs to do the right thing by his daughter.

Thanks for sharing this story.

One of the best written stories I've read so far. I want more of Daddy and Sunshine! Did she get pregnant? I wanna know if they had a lot of babies? Please continue this story!

Hello, Beloved Readers.

I can't believe that so many of you are still reading my works so many months after me withdrawing. (I was injured in an accident, plus lost several family members during this pandemic, and have only just started to recuperate this month.)

First and foremost, as always, thank you so very much for not only reading my work; but for taking the time out to comment and compliment it. Even when I've made even the dumbest mistakes, you all have been (mostly) kind when reviewing my stories and it really means the world to me.

So, a brief update: My old laptop crashed and I lost the last, "Daddy's Sunshine" chapter. I had my accident before I could write another chapter of "McKenzie's Turn" and typing isn't easy for me due to injuries sustained, so what is posted is all there is as of today.

HOWEVER...

If you can be patient and understanding about me needing to go slowly, mosty for health reasons, I will write another chapter of "Daddy's Sunshine." Unfortunately, I think that I will have to stick to my original plan of saving this "McKenzie's Turn" story arc for when the other is finished. I simply cannot commit to writing both. It will be too exhausting and painful. I am willing to try to finish "Daddy's Sunshine," though, because I really do love that story. I'm very proud of it and the feedback it's gotten.

Thank you for being so kind to us writers, even when bashing our work. LOL!

I appreciate you all!

Post to you soon.

~Daddy's Hellion

Absolutely loved it. More please

:((((( so sorry to hear that Hellion. these past two years have been so tough, I'm glad you made it through and I'll be sending prayers to you and your family.

Amazingly! Love Reading and definitely can't wait for moreee

I love this series and would love to read the last part, but first and foremost is your health. Do take care and will wait patiently for next reading.

Thank you thank you thank you!!

Get well soon Author..... I'll be waiting forever for your damn amazing stories. Take care yourself for your readers 😊😊

This is my second time reading this story...saved it as best of the best. I am glad you didn't bring McKenzie into the relationship. I hope you get better and continue to recover. If you are able to write another chapter of Daddy's Sunshine then I am ready to devour it! If not then it is still an ok ending. Best you take care of yourself first!

Please don't stop writing this story. Do more in the fedish room, what happens during and after the divorce, Daddy gives her what she wants soft and gentle, hard as nails, she gives daddy a hand job while he's driving, she buys a teddie with silk stocking, and 4 inch heals and a sexy ass dress for daddy's birthday.

Don't stop, this is so hot!

Don't know if anyone else has commented on this or not, but I got to thinking about the characters' names.

Their last name, Soleil, is "sun" in French. So, Shayenne is basically "Sunshine" Sun. And her mother (Luna = Moon) is Moon Sun.

Sorry to hear about your troubles. Your stories are well written and enjoyable. I hope you are able to add to them. Best of luck.

Really great writing, hoping you continue the series. Hope will continue to write. Your stories extremely well written. Hope to see more very soon!

All I want for Christmas is part 6 of this story, I am sorry you've had a terrible time of it lately, I really hope you doing well. Merry Christmas DH and a very Happy New Year to you. Ddraigfach x

(It's under anonymous coz i can't sign back in, I'm not too good with technology)

"A fucking minor was drunk in my house last night, Shayenne?" he growls angrily."

Um, Shey TOLD him that the reason she was in his bed was that Mckensie was passed out in hers

And HE was the one that drove her home

More! More! More! This is amazing! I don't know about the best but it's probably in the top 5 best series I read on this site.

This series is my all time favorite now.

This is my most favorite story all time!!

when are Sunshines daddy gonna fuck McKenzie?

Don’t ever bring other people into their relationship I’m territorial. I need a part 6 thot

please ! part6!!! and make her prego and no extra people, it seems to ruin it for me.

Please hurry up and finish up the story please.

Please do what you need to do to get your own stuff done

I wish you all the best. I can't wait for this in paperback. Hoping for more soon.

The story was good, but I hated that you drug it out in all these little chapters. Write the story beginning to end and post the completed story. Check out BurntRedstone and the stories he writes, they're books. He writes a full story not little chapters. More 'Writers' should follow his example, he writes his story then posts it. Not breaking it up into little chapters so that he can have his 'EGO' stroked.

Anony Mous

What a gloriously sexy lust filled story. If they existed in the real world she would be working streets and he would be in prison for a lo......ng stretch. I'm happy there's a fantasyland . 5 🌟.

I loved it. A great series.

Great series. Writing is very good. One more part where Mckenzie joins them and Luna’s dad and them cum together a couple of times would be hot especially ending the story nine months later, the divorce is final, and both girls are pregnant with his children.

This was one of the best stories I've read. Very well developed characters. I want a man who can fuck me like that!!!!

please i need more! i keep rereading this story it is my fav. i would like to see sunshine pregnant and her and daddy in love forever.

So fucking hot! Making me squirmy. Have Mackenzie fuck her own Dad and get preggers, then the best friends will have someone to talk to about their forbidden affairs and they can have babies at the same time. Maybe the Dads become friends too and they can all watch each other fuck at the fetish club.

That is amazing, I can't wait to see what happens next both sexual and not. Thank you writing this book

This whose series so far has been great and I can't wait for more. Keep up the work I can't wait for next part. Thank you so much for this story. 💗

Great story! This is my 2nd reading. Please continue. No need for pregnancy yet until fast forward a few years. They have so much to explore together, and have only scratched the surface. They could partake the following activities together:- shopping for adult toys and lingerie together, she becomes bicurious and he sets it up with someone at his fetish club and watches behind the scenes, he even joins in with her playing with another girl, and maybe they’re on vacation together posing as husband and wife. Maybe they do a hand fasting ceremony as the ultimate declaration of their love at some point, rather than a conventional ceremony, with just the two of them. It would be interesting to see her character grow and evolve from his cute 18 year old, to a confident, sexy woman in her twenties, and he is very conscious of her growth and falls in love even more. Maybe they start calling each other Charleston and Shay. No need to involve Kenzie in their intimate activities. I feel her experiences should be set apart from this couple. Maybe at some point they both have a run-in with their fathers somewhere that causes suspicions and realisation between the two friends and they have an honest discussion about it.

I hope there’s more. I want to know who the lady is that Sunshine recognized at the club. I also want to know what’s going on with McKenzie & her dad.

We want more! ;)

Wow this is great story my cock has not gone soft yet and I've read all of the parts .

And I love eating All the dripping pre cum !!

enjoyed what you've written so far, any chance of there being more?

I love that it's just the 2 of them. Just sunshine and her dad, no one else.

Damn I want another chapter. This was smoking hot.

More please

Part 6 pls

Really loved this series!

Great job, please continue the story

I WANT MORE NOW!!!!

PLEASE.

So sad that this is the last one! Just binged them all back to back! Fucking phenomenal! Seriously! Could be a book. There's an actual plot and its awesome and hot AFFFFF!!!! Would love more of these two! you're an incredibly gifted story teller! Packing that much character and relationship development into such short stories. Not to mention the spice....ohhhh the spice!! More please!