All Comments on 'Dad's Bowling Night with Mom'

Fantastic story. I loved the build up and the style. It was also very hot to read. The ending was quite bittersweet, but it worked. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. I will be looking forward to read your next works. ^__^

Very good story, well thought out and written very well.

great sexy story

Great to see you back!

What an excellent story for your first posting. I'm glad you did not rush it and let us follow the journey.

DJ

Welcome back legend !

Good to see you posting stories again. Take it easy, and ignore the self appointed lit-commentariat.

what an amazing story, something any young person could benefit from. Having an more experienced person pass on there knowledge, There was no internet to learn from in the 1950's for where a young person could receive a self education. Mom was very lovingly taken her son under her wings, yes I believe she benefited as well, and it was sad to now it had to end, She still had to stay at home, and he had options

i feel bad for only being able to give your inaugural work 5 stars as it deserves 20 times that many (that's 100, in case you aren't as good at math as you are at writing!)! From the start, i knew this would be a wondrous story of love, and set in the fifties i knew mom wouldn't be called a slut (huge turnoff for me) nor any dominance submission games, just mom giving her son a few (Hah!) pointers on the finer points of making out with girls. Making love. It's been said that all moms should school their sons like this to better prepare them for the world at large. If all moms were as loving and caring as this one, the world would not be wanting for love. Like Stevie Wonder sings "love's in need of love today...". It certainly is and this richly felt and thought out story greatly contribute to the amount of love in the world! Stevie would be quite proud of you! I'll have to sign off shortly as the tears in my eyes are making it hard to see the keyboard.

I only caught one typo: you typed 'on' when you meant 'own'. This almost complete lack of error on your part along with the very memorable, loving story should have this story nudging at the top of the hall of fame. The slut lovin' sex fiends might beg to differ, but that's obviously not your target audience anyway. Thanks ever so much for writing this beautiful story. Best one yet, in my humble opinion. As i say: 100***************************************! I look forward to many more by your hand

Finally my fav writer returned!

This is great story.

The end was the logical one but despite that, I found it depressing.

This was great. I was worried about the length, but the pacing was perfect and believable. (My first comment).

one other thing i thought of on the dog walk this morning: after the son got accepted to Northwestern, i'd have had her dressed in a poodle skirt and a letter sweater and oxford two-toned shoes, waving her pom-poms in his face til he came unglued, backing her onto the bed and having his way with her, no panties to pull down or bra to unsnap. That would have been a great way to start the consummation, the summation of their love. Then mom would cheer him on as he entered her for the first time, pom-poms waving all the time! Just a silly fantasy i cooked up. well, actually, you cooked it up; i just ran with it. Or rather strolled with it as my girl dog is starting to show her age. Thanks again for making my morning and i'm sure the rest of my days more enlightened and loving. You da man!

A bit of a slow burn but nicely done. Perhaps part 2 has Jack coming home with a girlfriend that needs some lessons too!

Very good story. Much better written than a lot of the tripe on here. Keep up this standard.

I am so glad that you posted a story again! Was sad when you removed the earlier ones, because they are all so much fun to read and so well made.

Thank you for this one, I loved it!!!

You might think about extending the character going to the university and how he fares with the female students (or professors).

Marvelous literary effort, more literature than literotica, perhaps. Although it became very hot as it progressed!

I’m so glad you are back. One of my favs.

Really well written story. Thanks

So glad to read your work again! I/T is a challenging genre, and you do it well.

Interesting and well written story. You developed the idea well. I was worried that it would stay on the mechanical level, but you slid into erotic territory nicely.

Brilliant. Great build and a very satisfying conclusion. Well done.

To jump on Mom's pro-French train, "Merveilleux!" I had a mother in the '50s who loved me as deeply as Jack's loved him, but the restrictions of religion and an even smaller – and small-minded – community meant that even the encouragement to excel in education and fulfillment were absent. Thanks for an alternate universe. 5 + fave.

It was a great surprise to see a new story from Eight Letters. I for one is very pleased to have him posting his well written and enjoyable stories again. I look foreword to every new one he posts.

Very good story. It's very hard to find this quality.

I liked how you show realistic relation between family.

Your characters more realistic nearly every lit writer these days.

If this story was longer and have more build up then it would be great.

Welcome back

Thanks for publishing here, again. I really enjoyed this story. You sufficiently won this reader over with character development and a believable story line in the first half, so that by the last two pages I was willing to suspend disbelief and enjoy the ending; a rare thing on this site. It's a well executed short story, and it captures the bittersweet transition from childhood to adulthood, of leaving the small town and family behind.

Glad you’re back, but something was ‘off’ with this work. Just a little too clinical or too drawn out

You Sir are a very talented writer, that was an exceptional read

apparently this is NOT your first effort here. Sounds like a lot of people love your work. I hope that among your future works are more mother and son love stories like this one. Kudos and thanks once again!

Very nice, thank you so much for this lovely story. 5/5.

Such a great story. It was fun watching their relationship develop. Like other comments, I would love to hear about Jack’s adventures in Chicago.

I think my favorite thing about this story is that you clearly wanted to take advantage of your time with your audience and teach them how to be conscientious when on a date. Lots of people just don't understand how much communication goes into a good date, and drawing the distinction between communicating *at* someone and communicating *with* someone was excellent reading. Great work.

You stole that story why are you back

You’ve got a lot of nerve returning to the website to publish more stories.

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It was one thing for you to plagiarise a far more talented author in JCMcNeilly, but the way you’ve refused to apologise for the theft, for months, shows what kind of character you are.

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When you frantically engaged in damage control in the immediate aftermath of being discovered, you actually wanted other authors to forgive you on account of you being “a good writer”. Well, good writers don’t steal from one another because they understand the severity of such a cowardly act.

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After your exile was cut short due to your ego demanding to be stroked, you’re back with more drivel like this. Having already banked 5,000 followers, everything you post will receive a strong rating by default. Most of them have no idea that you stole from someone more talented than you.

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Best of luck if you ever take your dross to the paid sites, you’re going to need it. As for here? My friend just said it best. Eagle One, fox two!

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0/100. Disqualified for plagiarism.

Hot. Nice buildup and well written.

With such a slow build up, having more sex scenes would be much better. However, still amazing story

Excellent, very glad to read your work again.

Good characters, good build, sexy times

It was suggested that Son was going to feast on Mom's treasure, I missed that not occurring on the page.

Sad, but necessary ending, although other directions are still possible

Five for you

awesome, good to see stories being published

Great story. Looking for many more.

As always incredible storytelling, thank you for once again sharing your talent! I would love to reread your older stories!!!

Good story! I was afraid the 50's setting wouldn't work for me, but there was no such issue. I'm glad you are back to writing and revising/republishing your better works. I only had a chance to read a few before they were all pulled.

5 ⭐.

So glad you’re back. This is a wonderful story and super hot. I love how the mom stays a mom and is reluctant and never turns into a whore. So many stories (like 99%) turn mom into a whore before I can get to page 2. That’s a big reason I enjoy your work. Also you’re just a very talented writer. Brilliant stuff. Thank you

Great story, look forward to more in the future.

Excellent! Kept it real, landed it well.

Good morning, afternoon or evening. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. There was just enough sex to make it plausible. And happening in the time frame that it did, only added to it. Thank you for a very great read.

Thanks for all the comments!

awesome story makes me remember growing up in that era well done

This was fantastically written! Such a beautiful slow-burn romance. Certainly one of the best I've ever read on the site. Bravo to you!

8letters

I enjoyed your story. I was six years old in 1952! My parents moved us to Michigan when I was five and they bought a starter house. It was a two-bedroom home. The house your story takes place in seemed to be very large. They were around and common. The mother did seem quite clinical with the sex. I chalked it up to her justifying it in her mind. If she had a nurse background it would have answered a lot of questions!

Thank you for the story and keep writing!

Very well done!

Great story and great to see you back!

Fantastic! For a first submission you covered all the bases for me. Enjoyed the story as it was developed. I was in no hurry to get to the end. Hope to read more from you soon.

Excellent story, and I loved the way you told it. Too many of the writers have their stories be all about the sex, yours are about the people. The sex bring something that occurs during the tale. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Excellent!

Glad to see you back here. Always liked your particular style and pacing of how these stories go.

Throughly enjoyed this story. Well written with great character development. I don’t think many people will have any realization of how difficult the times of the thirties and forties were; you give a hint, thanks

Great second story!! There just weren't as many things to do back then so a mother and son fucking was a good way to pass the time.

I loved the progression thru the parts. But did he ever get to taste his Mom directly with a little mouth to clit contact?

That story was phenomenal. 5 stars

Very well written again. A good feel for life in the depression era and just past it. The slow build-up makes such a refreshing change from the plethora of "insert tab A into slot B" stories that this site has.

Thank you again for the lovely story

Ally

Great story 5 stars

Best read ever, hope you write more in this era.

What a build up to one hell of a marvelous story I ever read! Kudos to you.

Loved it

A story well told with a brave and kind mom!

Thank you for the wonderful story.

You have masterfully conveyed the spirit of the era and the feelings of the characters.

I hope you will quickly restore the collection of your stories and write many new ones.

A very satisfying read all the way through, so thank you very much for sharing your exquisite talent with all of us out here in fantasy land!

I loved the slow build up. I thought it was delicious.

I very much like stories that contain moral characters. There's far too much slutiness in a large portion of the works on this site, so for that, I thank you.

I also think that your basing the story in 1952 was a stroke of brilliance.

On that note, I particularly enjoyed your descriptions of the mothers fashions! For me, that alone provided a lusterous icing on an already delicious cake, as I hate most modern fashion trends, like hair streaking, ugly tattoos, opaque nail polish, ridiculous piercings and low riders jeans.

While I never got to experience incest personally, I can state proudly that I got the privilege of losing my virginity to the silky embrace of my mothers lingerie one day in the laundry room. Home alone, I emptied the dryer, and found myself gently fondling a pair of my mothers nylon tricot full brief panties, still warm from the cycle. Before I knew what I was doing, I had stripped naked and pulled her panties up over my hips. A beautiful tricot nightgown soon followed the panties, leaving me stunned at the sensations this provided me with.

Suffice it to say that a painful erection resulted directly, and an orgasm that made time stop and the world disappear, soon occured and left me in a cummy pile on the floor.

To this day it's still my most profound sexual experience!

So hearing about Jacks mother calling him into her room and letting him see her dressed in a bra and slip with stockings to decide what dress to wear on their date was absolutely a turn on!

The blue dress with white polka dots was an excellent choice too!

So, thank you for taking us back to an era when women REALLY looked like women, and actually embraced being feminine.

The highest marks to you, 8letters!

Sincerely,

B4PW.

I enjoyed your story very much. Delicious is the right word.

Loved the story, what a great build up and flow through the entire story, never felt interrupted or broke the flow. Read it thru in one go, couldn't put it down.

Keep up the great writing, glad you're playing again. I haven't read a bad story from you, they're always great to read.

Slow. English authors shouldnt write american stories without an american editor. Noboby in america rubs a bottom!

You were never to tell anyone about it, damn it.

Five stars! I love the description of his mom’s clothing. Girdle, garter belt and nylons…oh my.

Hot slow seduction for Mom/son, thanks.

Well written, thanks. A sensible mother and a very lucky son, and no one gets hurt.

I love your writing. At first I was put off with th 50’s timing, but grew to love the setting.

I am looking forward to working (bad word) through your other stories,

I feel like a broken record but that was great and I really enjoyed it.

First of all, great to see you return to LitE. Your stories were missed.

I cannot critique in detail much since I do not have a good handle on english, but overall story felt great. Sometimes dialogue feels a bit overblown with all the gollies, but we are not people of fifties, and it matches pretty well with common portrayal of overeager nerdy young man from that time period. Anyway, thanks a lot.

This is without a doubt the best erotic story I have ever read. I found the story captivating and stimulating and appreciated the lengthy plot and character development.

The practical dating advice here is priceless. I wish I had someone to coach me up on dating and maybe sex, but neither of my parents did anything other than my father’s brief “birds and the bees” talk and my mother’s brief warning that a certain girl I was dating might be inclined to trap me by getting pregnant. I never had incestuous thoughts about my mother or even sexual thoughts about the mothers of my friends and other older women. I did spend a couple of years dating women older than I because I found college girls too emotionally immature and too sexually repressed. I’m going to extract the dating advice, add to it and send it to my nephew and possibly my grandson when he is of an appropriate age.

Does one take the charge of plagiarism seriously? Perhaps, yes, perhaps not. For any author, it is a painful exercise to see one's work reused elsewhere. I am reminded of the recent charge that a singer had copied a song. He, incidentally, played a few chords/ strophes in court, to prove his 'independent' creative process. On the other hand, everything we do today is a rehash of the past. It is different only in nuance.

The story has a lot of depth, nuance and reflection. The mother's views play a central role. It helps sensitise us, to how the mind works. And it showcases how we reflect in many different ways.

The mother treated her son with a deep and compassionate love and the son was grateful for what he received. They both helped each other and, if they are not dead, they lived happily ever after. Well, the mother may not be around anymore.

The descriptions used about the underwear and the mother's shape is ethereal. It is times gone by. I have read that there are a few women who do still like to dress in a similar fashion, even today. All is not lost. And the beauty of a mother and son finding such a connection is surreal. It has an authenticity to it. It is like a panting of a past that is always present, if we can let it live again. It is like listening to a piece of music, classical or pop. It is special and needs to be cherished.

Thanks!

Once again a story that I enjoyed read very much.

Good work mate

Another amazing story.

I wish I was a writer so that I could properly express how much I enjoy your work.

Excellent story, excellent build up! Worthy of 5 BIG ASS FUCKING STARS! Thanks.

There were a few families that had two cars factory works (Forman and Supervisors) I know because I live them good job Great Story.

Working my way through your whole portfolio, excellent work and thanks

Next chapter

Wow, Wow and Wow again! Thank you so much for this incredible story!

This is my least favorite work of yours. You're an excellent writer but this is a huge exception. I like a well founded story, knowing the characters, with a slow build up but the story line gets dragged out and is stale before chapter 6. I skimmed after that point. Mom is a bit weird with the various artificial limits, and how many times does she have to say "don't tell anyone?" After the fortieth time I get it. Just generally, way too much repetition for all characters and events.

I have read the story multiple times, though not every sentence. Going through the comments, it looks like I had made a comment last year, but I do want to write a few lines.

Thank you for sharing your vivid mind with us. The Despression and the War set a realistic background, to what transpired in that period. I am not sure whether one can analyse the story from a moral aspect. It does break rules and, as long as it remains between the two, does no one harm.

There is something magical of a mother and son coming together in this form. Could this be one day be acceptable to society? Perhaps not.

A lot of (intellectual) effort has gone into your work, which can not be said is the case in many stories here on Literotica. The days of using the brain in conceiving scenarios is slowly coming to an end. The forum has bots and manipulated photos galore. Some of the stories have a weird form that makes one suspect there is a machine churning out sentences.

Well, perhaps we can continue to enjoy the odd gem once in a while.

Wow. Fantastic story. Thank you.

it would be lovely to read a second chapter of this story maybe with a combination with a sexy mother in law after wife's long absence?

still bottom caressing was exciting as an idea

She never got her television?

It seems to me that this story would have been deeper if it had been told from her perspective.

That's another great story I liked a lot. You put a great effort in writing it and it shows. Thank you again.

One of the best stories I’ve read on Lit. The slow, building passion as the two set boundaries and ten went beyond, I enjoyed their emotional responses to the deeper bonds of passion between them. Playing a game of “Mother May I” was a brilliant idea. Please, Keep writing somI can keep reading.

Great story, especially mom's advice about women's thought process and how to escalate - most stories just jump to "and then they had sex", but I vastly prefer your style of slower and more plausible buildup. Thanks for writing!

Oh my what a hottie his mom turned out to be. But that is what makes a great story and this one rates. Having his mom turn it all off when he departs to college is really cool. Do not see that very often from other authors. I like this story.