by mypenname3000
This would be so much more enjoyable if the author wasn't a virgin who knows nothing about sex or female anatomy.
I liked it except for the ass to pussy thing. I know this is fiction but the thought of it is just wrong imo. It's unhygienic and the girl could get an infection. So I hope you'll stear clear of it. Or atleast write that his dick is cleaned beforehand.
Whoever wrote this has never touched a real woman in his entire life. It's just looping dialogue from random porn video scenarios strung together with copycat mind control. Even the incest angle is useless because the mind-slave aspect turns everyone into absolute brainless puppets.