All Comments on 'Damn House'

Usually I like your writing, for a 4 page story you did little character exposure, mostly just the prattling of a wuss.

Cheating pathetic selfish whore. Could and should the husband have done more? HELL yes. But as long as he and Angie live happily then I guess alls well that ends well. But I doubt it.

He was a little blind and naive...but we do stupid things for love. In the end, he kept his integrity and found love..and she lost out. Great story, even if sad. Thanks for writing.

All worked out my ass, he's still a little dick sucking moron and Angie will figure it out and put the screws to him too. What a shitty story, you ask why I read the whole thing, well "Brit Tease" mentioned it all "worked out" even though the husband was a "little wimpy" at times. This motherfucker lies as much as Obama.............eat shit and die.

Very bad.

if you're going to be a pimp, then you should know how much your whore makes and tell the whore not to squander the money on new clothes.

Basically he should have suggested separation when she refused to let up about the house. Unfortunately Angie's

role in all of this was highly suspicious. After all she led Becky to the pathway. Under any circumstances he should have made a divorce the minimum exigency for her starting to work in escort agency. Certainly he never would have found out anything if she hadn't told him. The fact that he accepted a large chunk of Peter's money does not speak well for our hero. A good portrait of a silly self-centered girl and a really wimpy guy.

if you're gonna keep writing, try surprising stories sometimes, with twists and turns that end unexpectedly, other than writing about a little British-like man begging the lovely but slutty wife to stop fucking around or he's gonna divorce her for sure, this time! lol

The kindest thing that can be said about this sorry timewasting tale is that it is a piece of CRAP

fuck you have stupid writers on this site, is this a hangout for mentally retarded writers?

A 100 from me because at least you've the courtesy -- not wasting your time arguing with readers after every single comment like lance gt. I respect this quality of yours. Keep it up.

thanks for the story!

But he does argue about the comments. Look at his previous stories.

BRIT. You never marry a slut whit her rep. The dumb ass brit can't keep a job and has to depend on her earnings. He should have given his mother a retroactive birth control pill

and the real sad part is you already knew this when you posted it. If you haven't taken the time to write your story, walk away for a day or two, come back and edit it for another hour, then walk away again, then edit again... if you don't care enough to make the effort DONT POST. You're wasting everyone's time. This was such a long, dull read. You could have made it MUCH SHORTER, added in some development of the people... added in some twists so it wasn't such an obvious story where NONE OF YOUR READERS CARE ABOUT THE PEOPLE IN IT. IF WE DON'T CARE.. THEN YOU'VE COMPLETELY MISSED YOUR MARK. Britease, I will no longer waste my time reading your postings because you've made it obvious that you don't even respect yourself enough to make an effort.

about the dumbest story you ever wrote. changing one whore for the one whore who whored the wife out. hey sometime you really should grow up. there is not the tinyest point of erotic to find. and for the rest what they did give me a shotgun.

the British super wimp begins with this

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<i>If any of this doesn't appeal to you, then please pass on to another story.

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Please vote and please comment --- I love it!</i>

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so in other words please comment and vote IF and ONLY if you LOVE this story.

The husband ...DICK... is a DICK. Does ANYONE really think the cunt whore wife cheated ONLY to keep the house? Hell at the end the wife admitted it...she loved the lifestyle.

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The story does not work because the wife LIED to DICK the British wimp... about her job at the Titty Bar.<b> But over the rest of the story DICK never mentions this character flaw by the wife ...Not Once! </b>

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For her to then come up with an idea to "dinner escort but thats all..." and DICK actually beleive it is so fucking absurd its a laughable plot development.

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It gets worse when DICK the UK wimp finally coonceedes the issue but only after the wife agrees to certain KEY stipulations.

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For the cunt whore wife to then come home very late 1

night with No bra her tits and pussy ravaged... Only to have DICK say NOTHING... defies explaination.

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<b>Given the way this author developes the plot... DICK should of said SOMETHING. But in the story he says NOTHING. </b>

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the story dies right there.

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awful.

Thankyou for another great story. I really like your use of language and the way you build a plot.

Kiwi87

Brit you write a good story but your male lead is so dumb that it really detracts from the overall read.

....can't quite cross the threshold from wimp to hardass, as his readers would like, myself included.Excellent writing, fine plot, poor character development and little retribution for a lying hurtful tart at the end adds up to half satisfied reader-pistolpackinpete.P.S.-to the anonymous Obama hater-how can you measure his lying quotient after 7 months in office? Do you really think he will measure up to slick willie or the chimp G.W. as a liar.Are you a typically ignorant conservative?No need to answer asshole.-Pistolpackinliberalyankeepetefrommaine

You will be pistoless Pete with no bullets in a couple of years so dance on fool. I thought the story was very good and was happy with the ending. Living well and happy is always the best in fiction or life, Thanks.

ignored the preface of this story where the author asked you to pass if this story didn't meet your criteria. Instead you chose to read it and then bitch and moan about it. What a bunch of ignorant morons and that includes HIV who has yet to write a story of his own. I said it before and will say it again. Those that can write and those that can't criticize. Enough said.

Becky is shallow as a... it will be good if you make "becky version of the facts"(and events).Did she regret it?

left all decisions to the slut. He never was more than a wimp, never once said no, he didnt even end the marriage she did after she chose to. You cant make a wimp a man by hiding the facts. I love it, married to a whore, then married a whore. Havent these idiots ever heard of STDs, HIV/AIDS, and the other nice tidbits you get?

shoulder maybe with the help of a crane he might be able to stand up. The writing I have no real objection to but I do to your introduction and to your story line. Your intro basically said the husband was wimpy along the way but eventually stood up for himself. I agree he was a wimp and just the wife losing her job could cost them the house. But every time it mattered he backed down to the wife's illogical arguments. Even at the end the husband is incapable of saying no, he leaves and comes home expecting the wife to have made a decision for him. Even then he is a wimp taking the wife's way out. The marrying the other whore, give me a break, first the ask the first wife to not be a whore and then marries her best friend who was the whore that got the wife into it. You dont marry runaroundSue and expect to have a faithful wife! Dumb as he is she was probably fucking around the whole marriage.

A lot of effort down the drain all because the story's male disrespect caused a lack of credibility for both the story and the writer.<P>

Its always puzzling to me why a decent writer values crap like this more than his own credibility and the loss of 99% of his readers respect.<P>

No one spends this amount of time writing about something he doesn't see the value of his investment.<P>

So you are what you do or write and this trash says a lot about this writer - none of it positive.<P>

Puzzling & sad.

. . . but I hate wimps and I really hate stupid wimps that trade one whore for another. For the most part I enjoy your stories immensely, this just wasn't one of them. Screw your disclaimer, I'll read any goddam story on this sight and offer any goddam opinion I feel like. Deal with it! You don't wanna hear it? Don't use a comment box. If you don't like being criticized for writing wimp stories don't post'em or better yet, don't even write'em! Most importantly don't believe anything from that anonymous guy, anybody that can't be bothered to make up a name and hang it on a comment, most certainly is a fictitious character not worthy of consideration or merit.

I don't understand the difference between Brits writing these stories or Americans writing the same or even worse.

Even admitting it may not be one of the best of Britease, the story as such is still better than what a LOT of other (USA) authors produce on this site. So why pick on the author. The writing is certainly OK. The storyline : is surely OK. The ending : you like it or you don't for your own reasons. I don't care. Going by what comes back in most of the US/other stories, being young and horny isn't different in the US or anywhere else, and it has always been so. People make choices. He made his. Was he a whimp? Absolutely not. He put up wit her attitude, because he loved and trusted her. Was he wrong? I think so. Too trusting ? Yes. Did he accept it ? NO !!! She made her own choice. Good luck and good bye. Finished. Time to move on and continue your life and try to make the best of it.

Nice to see that another of my stories has gone straight to the top of the comments portal, but it is disappointing to see yet again so much blatently racialist anti- British rubbish, much of which only vaguely relates to the story I wrote, and most or all originating from frustrated Americans, which is a pity, as all the Americans I know personally are such nice people. I guess it's all a matter of intelect, though I have my doubts whether some of them would know what that word meant.

Why oh why cannot some people not destinguish fact from fiction?

Does every story have to involve an ex Navy Seal, who's an expert on computors, now runs a surveillance agency, beats up the lover and leaves the wife in limbo ???

No wonder so many of the good authors who used to write here in 'Loving Wives' have now packed up, or at least reduced their output.

I haven't given up yet though, but I do have a quite big business to run, and the summer is our busy period, so my stories will be a bit less frequent.

Please keep reading and by all means keep commenting, but please, whatever horrible things have happened in your own lives, make the comments at least sensible.

I thought this story was interesting and well written. He dealt with the touchy-feelie bar situation in a very non-wimpy way. Then, once the husband figured out what was really going on, he dealt with it and moved on. I think some of the comments posted are rude. I think authors are going to move away from this site if the readers who comment don't lighten up - these are just stories - entertainment.

unbeleivably Britease has lashed out all all of his readers because readers held this author accountable to what he wrote.

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Instead of responding to ACTUAL valid criticism Britease says this: <i> Does every story have to involve an ex Navy Seal, who's an expert on computors, now runs a surveillance agency, beats up the lover and leaves the wife in limbo ?</i>

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sorry BT.. no one has said that.

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<b> YOU</b> wrote a story about a wife who was lying about what she was doing at a titty bar.

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<b> YOU</b> wrote a story about a wife and husband at an impasses of this dinner escort thing.. and they Both agreed NO sex and she was to stop immediately if that ever happened.

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<b>YOU</b> wrote that when the wife showed him her tits & pissy and that she was fucking he did NOTHING. He said NOTHING

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YOU did. NOT your readers.

SHUT UP! Does EVERY SINGLE story you read need the third degree? Does every single writer on this site Need the third degree from you? Lighten UP Harry. And the rest of you as well. I didn't like this story that much but I have given it top marks to counter the likes of Harry and few a strange people who slag off writers when they have NO stories themselves. They generally can't spell, even in the comments! And Britease is correct have you noticed that a large amount of older writers, as in ones that used to post here have now gone to other sites? Is it any wonder they do such a thing with the likes of Harry and his cohorts. As I said I didn't like the story but I do want writers to stay on this site. Which I hope other less rabid readers will also want.

Britease - I actually enjoyed your story because of its cultural context. Obviously, in the UK, it is OK for women to act like sluts until they are ready to settle down for marriage. BTW: slut is not a negative word- simply someone who enjoys sex without strings. Niger and Dick were also big time sluts on campus. I guess I viewed the outcome of this story as fitting. Dick who fucked every female he could his dick into ended up marrying Becky. Dick and Becky got stupid with the purchase of their house. Now rather than just walking away from the house Becky decides to take a job which valued her body over her brains. Right from the beginning Becky story valued her house and high-end lifestyle over Dick and their marriage. She never loved him. Dick was a starter husband. Is it any wonder that she was able to advance so fast at her old job? Given Becky need for money and the escort job it was inevitable that she would trade her body again for a better lifestyle.

The one thing I did not like about the story was portraying Dick as a victim. He knew what Becky was like in school. He allowed himself to get in the financial situation with the house. He allowed becky to lie to him about the Bar. He allowed Becky to work as an escort right after she lied to him about the Bar. He then "accepts" the situation and he is surprised that Becky is ready to trade up by dumping him. Dick is not a wimp - he was a fool. You ask what Dick could have done in that situation. Simple - stop paying on the house and take himself out of the situation. Let them take the house, declare bankrupty and start over. Becky could not afford the house even on her escort salary. Let's face it- most men are wimps when they love without thinking and most men go through life without thinking about the "givens." This story was a good one because it shows what a fool gets in the end. For UK and other European readers I guess they see a happy ending where Dick gets to raise a family. In the US, we see that Dick gets the second place prize, Angie, who encouraged Becky to join the flesh peddling trade in the first place. Either way I thought that it was what Dick deserved.

I would rather be critiqued by Harry than all the other useless Anon comments that don't have any value to them, other than to debase the writer. At least he'll read it and then give his opinion, which is what we're all looking for as writers in the first place. As much as he does get right into the meat of it and pick it apart, I again will say that he does make his point clear and I for one am taking some of his suggestions and using them. LanceGT

I commented on Harry being better at tearing a story apart and take some of his suggestions and critism as useful. I'm receiving emails now saying harry is bullshit. I might agree on some levels, but at least he has some decency to his comments. I have blasted Harry for comments on stories I felt didn't deserve it, but when it deserves it, it deserves it. Every writer on here, including myself, knows we're going to get some negativity from the readers. What we don't like is readers who's opinions aren't about the story itself and the writing, but the fact they either don't like the writer or any of their work, no matter how good. Britease is a good writer and knows it, but didn't comment on the critique Harry gave on the story. I just had a critique by Harry on my story, the one that caused so much controversy not long ago, and I know it deserved what it got. I was told by Anon. that I would be cut up, fucked over and murdered on here by Harry. If you read his criticism on my story, I fail to see where any of that happened. So if you like Britease's stories, as many do, allow the writer to voice their concerns over lousy comments. Write to Britease personally, as many of my readers do for me, and thank him. Post your comments on Feedback on how much you enjoyed it and let Britease know he has fans.

Harry, normally as you know, I don't take you to task over what you say too much. I don't always agree with you, and you do have a certain individual way of expressing yourself, but often, as Lance has just pointed out (Thank you by the way), your comments can make sense. If I do have a complaint against you, then it is that I find your views a little 'restricted in outlook' should we say. However, we have discussed this before by private e mail, and I know your views, and hopefully you know mine.

I must take you to task however over your comment that I have just critisized ALL my readers. I specifically didn't do that, and I didn't even critisize yours! I even welcomed negative comments as long as they made some sense. If you had read my comment, it was aimed at the group of racialists out there who condemn almost any British (or Australian or whatever) writer, almost whatever they write. If they did it against blacks rather than Brits, there'd be an uproar. I've always seen you Harry as a decent sort of a guy underneath, and I'm a little disappointed that you cannot give us Brits a little support over this, and join me and others who are condemning this group who are undoubtedly driving good writers away from this site. For example, you won't be hearing from GW66 anymore. Incidentally, a few weeks ago I doctored my Literotica e mail messages to refuse any messages from 'Annon.' writers, having received a stream of hate mail and even death threats. Since then????? Not one such comment. What a bunch of cowards these 'big' men are. So, please Harry, take a little more time to read before you burst into print, or you may find one day, that there are no more stories being posted for you to read. That would be a pity, and I for one would miss our little discussions.

I, like many others, quit posting here in large part because of Harry & his ilk. Never a posting of their own work, but they always know how to tear down other people's work. What a jerk! Britease, keep writing, you're getting better all the time, & while I don't always agree w/ how you sketch your characters, at least you do it very well. Keep 'em coming down the pike. BTW, when I find time to post, I do it on Stories On Line, where fortunately Harry has not discovered or they won't let him post his crap.

You can't pay your mortgage and you can't sell it. Your wife tells you she has a non conventional job but is not doing anything inappropriate. You want to believe her because you desperately need the money but her track record on telling you the truth is lacking.<P>

Tough call. Rock and hard place.<P>

I can understand his hesitation to confront her. We all would prefer the easier way out. But, despite the increased sex, the marriage was over. Sometimes you just have to do the right thing. <P>

Not your best but perfectly readable. Thanks for sharing

I usually like your stories, but this one had me going crazy, because he was such a twit. It's funny, because she left him for a homosexual. What a silly cow. Luis

I don't often comment on stories, but this is exceptional. Your narrative and style are excellent, and very realistitic. It's a sad story, but you should really be proud of it - well done!

I have become a fan of yours but this is not one of your good stories. In fact this is the only poor stories of yours that I've read.

60 year old George

...and I defy any unreconstructed asshole to deny me that right. I'm fed up to the back teeth of twots like Harry lecturing authors as to what they should write when he hasn't got a creative bone in his body.

'Bar room lawyers' is one of the more kind epithets I've heard about such people. I liked it and it had a happy ending – it was a pretty reasonable plot and well executed. Above all, it’s Britease’s story, told how he wants it to be told. Ergo, fuck off Reichsturmfuhrer HarryinVA of the hyper-inflated ego and miniscule imagination. The only talent you and your ilk possess is that of how to make yourselves as objectionable and obnoxious as possible. I can't believe you have some authors actually canvassing for your support when all you are is an overrated hack. These are stories – IT’S ACTUALLY FICTION - try writing your own instead of being a perennially overrated reviewer, criticizing stories which are free, entertaining and for your enjoyment. If you don’t enjoy them, by all means say so but don’t deconstruct the plot and tell the author how she/he should have written it. Have you ANY idea how hurtful and humiliating some of your comments are? I’m not an author and have no ambitions in that field, but by God I do appreciate those who put their asses on the line by submitting stories on this site, only to have ‘Super Harry’ come rampaging through destroying their talent and pissing them off. ‘The Wanderer’ (now Denham Forrest), one of the finest writers this site has, even stopped posting on here for a while because of pillocks like you. Grow a pair and DARE to put your OWN offering up for review, being as you know everything there is to know about the suitability of every fucking plot in the world. Please don't believe your own press – some authors are probably a little scared of offending you but in reality they should be rising up in revolt at some of your offensive garbage. Yes, you do a thorough review and I can appreciate many of them, but they are generally NOT gold standard and, guess what, they’re YOUR OPINIONS, often crudely and insultingly expressed, to confirm that you have neither class nor manners.

Britease, please don’t get involved in arguing with that egotistical dunderhead, whose adoring coterie will one day realize that his IQ is exponentially less than his ego, no matter how it’s measured. He’s about as necessary as a lobbyist and it’s time he was called out on his crap.

I’m not a member because I don’t write stories. There should be a category for ‘reviewers’ in Lit and then the membership of this site wouldn’t have as many zeros as the US overdraft.

Oh and, as an aside, well done – I enjoyed the story and gave it a 5.

Please write more.

P.S. I had to join to post a comment, so I’m now ‘curiousss’ because I couldn’t let Harry’s crap go unchallenged.

learn to use basic things like paragraphs.

the problem Mr curiouss is that NO one else like the story

41 comments 38 of them negative or severely negative

and his "..lies as much as Obama" bullshit, just eat some more of Murdoch's cum out of Palin's ass and step off.

Thanks!!!!!

Thank you curriouss. I appreciate your support. As regards Harry, I think your maths need a bit of brushing up! Besides, you don't see in the public comments all the private e mails of support that I get, from people who don't want to get involved with some of the garbage that is expressed publicly. Curiouss is right though, as much as us writers enjoy doing our stuff, the public acceptance of it is also very important, and somewhat mindless and sometimes outright rude comments will eventually piss us all off, and then they'll be nothing for you to read. I'm already aware of several good writers who have simply changed their names, simply to avoid these people who search for them so that they can be rude to them.

Maybe I'll have to do the same eventually. I've already refused annon. comments on my direct e mail contact, in order to cut out the death threats I've received. Yes --- honestly -- I don't take them seriously, but it's true. Pathetic eh?

I liked it and think you did a great job of writing. I don't know why if people don't like what they are reading, why not go find another story. Seems to me that they just like to bitch and moan about anything.Maybe it's because they have a "damn house" also. Keep up the good work Brit cuz I think it's great. thanks

I loved that car to bits, and to bits, it fell. It was my first car, and was half bought with my very own money, and half given to me by my father. This car was way older than me, it was a Morris Marina, lemon yellow in colour, but unfortunately, the colour wasn't the only lemony thing about it.

It spent more time in the garage leaking oil in the floor than it spent on the road giving me driving pleasure. My love for it and what it signified to me was so strong; I refused to give up on that damn car, even when my father told me that I was throwing good money after bad at it.

Harry, sometimes we make stupid decisions for completely ridiculous, illogical reasons. It’s what makes us human and not divine. What perfect world are you living in that makes this story so completely unrealistic? Why is it so hard for you to understand that Dick loved Becky; probably more than I loved theat stupid Morris. If we all lived in Utopia, then there’d be no Loving Wives stories for you to get on your high horse about, now would there.

Suck it up Harry and just go with the flow.

Amanda

Second, it switched to a completely different and very stupid story [I dislike stupid] so, before the end of page 1, I stopped reading jumped to the end and gave the story a 1* rating.

Good story Brit.

I get it that he cared about his wife, resented the house, acquiesced about her job because of her desire to keep the house and he cared about her - for real!

Did he suspect she was enjoying herself, even at the bar - sadly, of course.

When a man loves a woman he tries to be patient and hope. Putting off the obvious is in pure hopes that things will change.

She is and was a slut, pure and simple and she iked the bar, the feel ups and it goes without saying - she liked the escort business. Stupidly, she kept telling herself that she wanted to be loyal but in reality, she didn't care, just keep the house and the back up stud hubby.

Nice touch on the ending. Five (5)!

Thanks

it worked for me. I suppose there are those who would marry a whore and be happy. but he wasn't one of them. So you see your marriage ending, what do you do? Well, what he did was good. He rode the whore until his ass could take no more, and with his money problems over, ended it.

Would he have been better to divorce her at the start? That turns the moral high ground into a financial swamp. Where 's the good in that?

Chilley

I knew she had been around the block several times. I thought she was faithful to me until she flew to another state with one of her bar customers and did not bother to tell me, her Mother told me later. I left her ass (and went back to my wife) and I grieved over her for almost a year. I finally pulled out of it, met her by accident once and we went for pizza. Soon we were making love again but be both knew how things were. I still loved her but I could not leave my wife again, she had graciously taken me back once. Leila moved out of state, she told me that she was going to because I was never going to leave my wife (true, there) and she met a nice guy and married him and she was happy that she would not have to work again to support her children. I often wonder how that worked out as he was an Air Traffic Controller and this was in 1968. A bunch of them went on an illegal strike and got fired, I have always hoped that he was not involved in that. I often wonder how she is doing. I later fell in love with another woman but did not leave my wife for her, she (the Third Love) refused to let me. We still are great friends but no longer lovers. She was always jealous of Air Force Girl (as she called L----) because she loved to fuck Air Force men and her first husband belonged to the Air Force, too. So now I have loved three women in my life and still love two of them (in my own way). I have been married over 57 years. My wife told me many years ago that if I messed around to lie to her about it, I took that as permission. We have a bunch of grandchildren and great-grandchildren so it has worked out. I still have feelings for L---- but not so much any more. I still have strong feelings for my third love but since I am 21 years older than she is we are best friends only. I could write a book, LOL. Thank you, Britease, for writing. I am looking for a few happy endings now.

Can't say I cared much for the tale. When you fall for a fucking cunt you've really sunk to the bottom. He deserved better and I guess he found it in the end.. Maybe.

great story....all's well that ends well. 5*

but why trade a whore for the woman that put your ex-wife on the whore path? It makes no sense.

Thought he should have put his foot down long ago, if it cost the marriage, small loss, lost it in the end anyway.

The way things ended for the ex made the story for me!

I was hoping he would seek a job in Dubai and leave her with the damn house.

of the trials and pitfalls in a marriage.

that # is too close to home making the count not in any favor. TK U MLJ LV NV

Talk about being caught between a rock and a hard place. He had to believe her when she worked as an escort - for his own piece of mind. He couldn't walk out as he had nowhere to go. It was the most emotional and thought provoking story I have read. I am glad he ended up back with Angie.

It is just a pity that the detractors didn't read the story. Or maybe they don't have a heart or intelligence to see a world through other peoples eyes.

Thanks for sharing.

"What really pissed me off was that I'd never seen the damn dress before." - She's doing this to make money to save the house, then she's spending money on new, expensive dresses?!

He has a kinder heart than me. I DEFINITELY wish her badly!

2 stupid people dumber than a sack of Hillaries.

Sees the cunt naked on a guys lap and what does he do? joins him in screwing her.

WTF.

He wallows in self pity. She can't give up her whoring ways.

So dumbass gets in bed with another whore.

Definitely one of your bad stories, britease.

... but not with your longer stories.

The longer ones are starting to become a little formulaic. Husband puts up with humiliation... then gets shit on. After which, sometimes, he's tossed a tasty fish; just like a circus sea lion.

Shes the one that caused all this crap and you end up with her ? stupid is as stupid does......

"Shut up you dummy," she responded. "You've ruined everything you stupid sod. I've lost a well paying job and now we're going to lose our house."

Sell the house, declare bankruptcy if you must, and start your lives together over. You don't sell you body. Stupid. Wrong values.

The story was well told, but the wife was a fool.

Another one I didn't like, but so many more that I do.

What a wimp.Should have dumped her after the first date house or no house .I f they have no money where did the money for the new dresses come from?.Also why would Peter need to pay off the mortgage,Becky would have earnt enough for them to pay it off themselves

That I didn't care at all for. Oh, well let's see if the third one is the charm. Signed: BTW

Didn't you Brits use to be men? Hard to tell from this twaddle.

Normally I feel bad for cuckolds. But this guy is such a stupid insipid wimp he deserves all the pain.

Major snooze Fest

The second story where the wife has basically prostituted herself out , and the husband at best just pulls his hair out in frustration and leaves the sentiment, " this just won't do ! ".I love most of your stories and the unflappable husband is certainly a big part of the humor to me. But in some cases , I think he should express more hurt and more angrr, much more than "honey , don't" , or "honey, please stop ! " But "honey get the heck out of here, you have broken my heart and destroyed my love and my patience". This woman's deception, even in a comical fiction, is one to spring a strong come to Jesus moment. The return of his original girl was predictable but fun.

Well ----- Never even thought about that, and Angie had been there all the time. Angie had been the one that I'd fancied the most when we'd first met them.

Crazy I know, but .....?

Why not indeed,

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Why not? Maybe because of Angie your wife is now a whore

Becky deserved to have been BURNT!!! She should have just left Dick as soon as she started to prostitute herself and not string him along. BTB!!!!

Why can’t we know what Becky is thinking?

This was literally the truest sickest cuck crap of losing ones wife to another man.

No matte rhow you dress this mental illness up thats all it was. Not sure why so many Brits are n to cucking like rightwing Americans but, damn, you are a sick lot.

Some of your stories are really good.

Some are really shit.

This one was really shit.

It really is a sad story. She clearly values money over relationships. He stayed way too long trying to keep it together.

Becky’s story and a confession of her fall into depravity would have made a good follow up story.

Ugh!!!! Should have dropped her at the beginning of it. This suxed

When does Nigel return from Dubai and take up again with Angie? Nothing permanent, just enough to destroy all trust and love.

One thing I've noticed with Britease is that they can't write emotion worth a damn. Every character is the same, dull, unfeeling, unresponsive, and ridiculously passive. None of them have an emotive bone in their lifeless inky bodies.

Dick, portrait of a simp...

Esto no es para mí, gracias por nada

Esto no es para mí, gracias por nada

IMHO, a lovely story about people finding their way through life. I liked it. 5*

@Anonymous 5 months ago. 'Can't write emotion worth a damn.' That's because we're British don'tcha know. We're not like you Yanks who rush around wailin' and burstin' into tears all over the place at the slightest setback (at least according to LW stories). Above all else we are taught to keep a stiff upper lip, remain calm and above all - DON'T PANIC!

Weak ending, where is the passion? The lust was apparent, but no passion that made sense to put up with her behaviour. Interesting characters but somehow fell flat, and I don't know why,

MC was an idiot to have anything to do with Becky or Angie halfway down the 1st page. Gah!

'Can't write emotion worth a damn.' That's because we're British don'tcha know. We're not like you Yanks who rush around wailin' and burstin' into tears all over the place at the slightest setback (at least according to LW stories). Above all else we are taught to keep a stiff upper lip, remain calm and above all - DON'T PANIC!

And that's why these stories are boring.

Britease's stories always start out interesting but quickly get extremely boring because the writer not only doesn't put in any descriptive detail but overwhelmingly avoids including drama and/or emotion.

As somebody else said, it's always that British stiff upper lip bullshit, that makes for very boring reading. Forget proper confrontations, forget the man actually putting his foot down before the wife becomes a slut, forget even a proper attempt at vengeance, etc

I suppose if the goal is only to generate outrage, then that's a successful formula. It does not however make for actual good stories.

I liked this story, glad Dick and Angie figured it out

Was a tad too long with too much details that I thought unnecessary, but a good story nonetheless.

Endings fall flat or there is none, there doesn't seem to be any dialog after for the fallout to be effective.

Eh, there was a lot that didn't make sense. Like how is he going to stand for her using the house that he doesn't even like against their marriage? Or when is him being the wrong reason she was allegedly telling the agency "no," to suggestions of sex with the client? If I'm the reason my wife won't have sex with someone else, that's fantastic. She can want to all she wants just like I do, so long as nothing comes of it. Also, how does he not have answers for anything obvious? Like when she asks what's the difference between her flirting with a client of the bank at lunch for their business as opposed to her dating a man for money? Well let's see: she was on the clock for the bank, it was for the client's business with the bank, and schmoozing the banks client's is only part of her job. Whereas with the escort, that's her only job, and it's only for him and her. I suppose the personal side of it is the main difference. I'd throw an ultimatum back in my wife's face also because why is she willing to go that far to pay for the house, but not willing to sacrifice the house for their marriage. Should have dumped her.

Очень умиляет чисто английский взгляд на взаимодействие полов и социальное структурирование общества. Если говорить проще, то многовековое воспитание рабов искорежило сознание людей и общества.я надеюсь, что арабы и негры всё-таки подкорректирую ориентиры поломанным морально

He's so dense that it's hard to feel any sympathy for Dick.

I do not like this tale.I truly hate MCs with no balls or pride. Also far to lengthy to explain about a dumb husbands failure to act correctly. You britts seem to accept that it's fine..There is no excuse,NONE, for a husband that has pride,self esteem,integrity to allow a scenario as presented to go down.Absolutely no respect for any male like your MC,just disgust..Now if he has no intelligence I would simply feel sorry for him.

Frankly, if what Angie said was true, that she didn't like the dates after a couple of them, he should have gone to her about what Becky was doing. Considering that Becky only shrugged her shoulders after he noted that it wasn't the first time she had extramarital sex, he should have told to just leave because it was clear, she didn't love him. She loved the house, but not him as she had said that love wouldn't put food on the table, but she never would know, since she never tried. I also would have made sure that Becky did not contact Angie because he would not want her giving Angie ideas about potentially restarting her job there, thinking if Dick put up with her for so long, maybe Angie could do it. She claims that she didn't want to hurt him anymore, but she didn't care about that when she did what she was doing. Though I kind of wish that we could see Becky's perspective, such as what happened when she learned that Peter was caught and if Angie ever speaks about Dick to her, which hopefully, he made sure that Angie doesn't. Becky doesn't deserve to know what is going in his life.