by oggbashan
this would make a great mystery novel...keep up the stories, hope to see more soon
What a treat! Please continue...I'm very interested to discover just how dangerous Julia is - to his heart!
....a suggestion of it along with a beautiful woman in the mix. A murder mystery, too! What's next, Og? Please, no more sheep!
What more can you ask for? A beautiful blonde, a chivalrous stranger, murder, and sheep! Good luck Og!
Wonderful. Intriguing, mysterious and just all around excellent. You paint lovely word pictures. I could see the scenes as they came by. Looking eagerly forward to the next chapter.
Patti
Ogg, I was only going to read one chapter of multiple entries, so that I could read other contenders. Now I've got to read Chapter 2. D*** you.! If I don't get round to voting every story, you are to blame.
I sure hope there are more chapters! Will check now...I love your style!