All Comments on 'Dangerous at Night Pt. 01'

by SierraSprite

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The_PedantThe_Pedant12 months ago

I'm interested in whether the author of this tale, set in London, is really English.

I think maybe not. The English spelling Is "honour", not "honor" and we refer to "maths", not "marh".

SierraSpriteSierraSprite12 months agoAuthor
Lacking grammar

These people from the Sierra Nevada have obviously missed out on their 'maths' tutoring!

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nthusiasticnthusiastic12 months ago

Like Alan, Sarah has swept me away. Definitely want to know more about her. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great start, is it intended to be current contemporary? If not then I’m still trying to pin down when it’s set. It’s a refreshing change to read a story that isn’t just random sex. Not that there’s anything wrong with random sex! Bring it on.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

OnethirdOnethird12 months ago

A proper girl, all studying, wine and roses. Stiff upper lip and all that- will we see her with her hair down, metaphorically speaking? Or perhaps it is meant to be a light-hearted spy romp. In any case, a fun start.

Ravey19Ravey1911 months ago

A delightful start although differences in English betray the author. But I have no expertise in UK spying circles anyway so going with this interesting story.

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