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Some things do have a consequence, taking a man's wife away from him can be a dangerous thing to do.
I did that, so I guess I am guilty as charged.
Alice and I are in love, mostly happy. But we look closely at every strange vehicle, sometimes we lie awake at night, listening.
We both know why but we don't talk about it much, not really.
Maybe it will always be hanging over our heads.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoI find Charles is the worst of these people.
He was a controlling asshole who tried to dominate his wife and treat her as a chattel or is that cattle.
Alice went looking for love not dominance and she found it. Was she cheating YES but why wouldn't she. Everyone craves kindness not dominance.
I also would like a second chapter where Charles tracked them down and while armed broke into their home. Have Alice put four rounds centre mass as Charles threatened her husband. And while he is dieing have Alice explain to him that orders and dominance do not make for a good marriage.
Anonymousover 4 years agoRegardless of your views about the rightness (actually, the wrongness) of the characters, it is an attention-getting, attention-holding story. And that is what I read Literotica for -- entertainment.
Also told in a straightforward manner, with enough background (eg. the beach scene) to properly set the stage, without the too-much that becomes tedious which is characteristic of too many Literotica stories.
Paul in Oklahoma
