by bi_dad56
...this is a believable, and even poignant, tale about two adult friends who take their relationship to the next level. I must say I find the subplot about the nudist teenage daughters a little creepy and out of place, though. Maybe mixing Incest/Taboo and Gay Male categories isn't the best idea. Best, Ken
story would have been so much better had it been 2 dads/2 jock sons....and yes..definetly...adult bi among all....big turn-on for women and bi couples like ourselves...
A really good story. I don't know if you intend sequels or not. If you do, I can see the sense in spending a lot of time on building the characters and not having much sex. So, I hope you do plan to take the characters further. I don't know about the teenaged girls either. I think the story might get creepy if you get incestuous, or having either dad be with either girl. It might be interesting if you go with dads and their gay relationship and the girls developing a lesbian relationship.
My only suggestion for improvement is the need for more sex described in graphic details.
After I read your first story I had to read this one too. This is the best I have ever read. If all relationships worked out this well... Gay, straight, bi or somewhere in between matters not. Love is the answer. Wait, didn't the Beetles say that about 50 years ago or was it just John Lennon? ;-)
Good story but didn't like the end unless this was going to be an incest/taboo story.