All Comments on 'Dark Chocolate'

by roddymac99

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
has soem

The story contains some pure garbage of hashed together words that aren't real words just random letters to make junk words. Like "innit" that probably should have been "isn't it" thus making the story junk.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fun story

Poor Dale doesn't stand a chance.

khele2k2khele2k2almost 9 years ago
Well written

I wouldn't take the last guy too seriously. Clearly an American that hasn't seen many English movies. I particularly like the 'yeh' used in the story, reminded me of Sienna Miller in Layer Cake.

This is actually quite well written and the leadup of the story is great. I also like that it's a girl who's not really attached to a guy she's seeing instead of the typical married wife in these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story

That bitch got fucked hard and I bet when dale fucks her he will be thinking why can I not feel any walls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great

More please.... maybe make the BF a cuc

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I need more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This is great...my new favorite !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Follow on

This is a great story and I would like to read more of Chile's adventures if you write them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Absolutely awesome

Good little white girl pleasing beautiful and deserving black cock.

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Amateur author using my imagination to try to create real-life plots with realistic characters and the odd twist. I hope to present my tales with a high degree of reality. On occasion, they may include localised dialect to help character appreciation. Likewise, the charact...