All Comments on 'Dark Eden: Gone to the Dogs'

by Evil Alpaca

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
DArk Edan a real winner

Took me three days to read the story due to work demands and worth every minute I spent. I love the build up , the visuals, the dialogue between the women is real conversation, not the crap as so often happens in scene stories. I like the characters and their development. All and all you have a winner here if I could have voted higher then 5 I would have hope you get the H mark on this one it deserves it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
holy wow!!!!

that may be a long storry but i give it a big thumbs up that is great couldnt read it all at once as well i need to control myself but way to go. keep wrighting please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great work love them all

what can i say but wow this is another great story they just seeme to get better and better. keep it up and waiting for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Brilliant

Again. As always. I love how you not only manage to make the sex blistering hot, but the characters so distinct. I am blow n away by the close attention you pay to the psychology of the characters. I enjoy all your works, but Isabel and Torrie? Swoon. I'm dying to read more about this pairing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Fantastic attention to detail

I really love how you tie different characters into you stories and eagerly anticipate the next story. Great Job

Landrious1Landrious1over 18 years ago
Grand As Always!

This is a tremndous addition to the Saga of the Lost in Texas and company of characters! I love theses stories and look forward to more! Please write the rest of the weeks visit, I implore you!

ShikeShikealmost 15 years ago
Enticing

Well written and I truly love Alice and Liz's relationship, especially since outside the bedroom Alice seems to dominate. I also enjoy the commingling of your casts. I would enjoy seeing more stories involving commingled casts, such as Shannon and Sandra with the Lost in Texas group.

BaronScrewtapeBaronScrewtapealmost 13 years ago
more?

I would love to see Alice experiencing Torrie's style of S&M. Though honestly I don't really think she would be as into it.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
Oh My!

Really wonderful story. I sure hope you have more of this story to tell! Please keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hmm

Moderately surprised no one has ever pointed out that stocks go around the ankles and prevent spanking as the person in them is sitting down. The story describes a pillory.

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