All Comments on 'Dark Handsome'

If the greatest storyteller that Lit has ever spawned ( no offense Adrian Luverkun or DreamCloud ) ( or either of our editors , for that matter ) , teams up with these Editors and overall Uber Talents & Literotica Beauties to actually firm his already firm stories up even more ! Well , I'm sure there will have to be some ancient Prophecy being fulfilled !

Going to check online for any Volcanic eruptions or any other of nature's Apoplectic signs or plagues , as this development has surely rocked the Planet !

Obviously awaiting on pins & needles for the next chpt. !

Dark 12" Black Cock. This would add an element your story is sadly lacking.

IMHO.

Anona Moss

Happy to see it over here! Five stars all the way.

Q, be glad it was just your shoulder, LOL!

Sir, you make a very nice story. Well written, good character development, believable characters - and with good grammar & spelling, too! It's nice to read something other than the typical. Well done! There's a reason you're among my Favourite authors.

Thanks for sharing.

Hope to not be left hanging too long for the continuation. Umm, What other site?

What a great story! Q is a true story teller with so many interesting little side stories tossed in for good measure. We have a plot, a likable couple, murder, intrigue, love, and sex. It checks all the boxes. Great story and do not wait too long to post the next chapter! This is an example of exactly why it is that Q rules Literotica. It's called talent.

You date yourself with this reference. A fitting tribute to JDM would have been to put a color in the title. Great work as usual.

There is only one Qhml1. What a great, great story! I was as enthralled by every word as the first time I saw it. You are the man, my friend. Thank you for posting this great story, Randi.

Part two has been written, edited, and submitted. It should be out in a day or so.

Thanks to all who have read it and commented.

Thanks again, ladies, for your help.

Q

Loved the story. Your editors deserve a great thank you for making a good writer so much better.

I agree with greatest storyteller, too. I could read your writing over and over again. Thank you so much for sharing!

You hooked me with this one. Can't wait for part two!

Looking forward to part II.

On page 4 when Dirk meets Jasmine's boyfriend, the boyfriend introduces himself as Jim. When they part Dirk says, "nice to meet you, Tom". Just curious.

Great story! I'm waiting for part 2 with much anticipation.

It's so nice to read a story written in a literate manner.

It's even better that it's engaging.

I look forward to more.

I'm looking forward to the second chapter. Thanks for sharing your work.

I gave the story five stars. If there was a mechanism to do so, I would have bumped it up to 6 stars for your inclusion of the Eastern Carolina sauce vs. the straight vinegar sauce.

Great story!!

I deeply apologize to all the readers and to Q. I gave him the wrong version of chapter two and have caused a delay in the posting of that chapter. Please don't blame Q and accept my apologies; it is totally my fault. I also apologize to Girlinthemoon. Off to the flagellation chamber.

It's OK Ms. B., after all you do for us readers!

And here is the "had" that is missing from the fourth paragraph. And if that is all I have to nitpick about, it is a well done story. Good characters, variety, some moralizing, some romance. I look forward to a continuation from one of my favorite writers even before I read this. "A Summer by the Lake" is a special favorite.

If ever there was a six start story, this is it. Is it misguided and overzealous fans of some status quo? Hard to imagine that a story could be better.

I can't wait to read the following chapters of this amazing story! You have written a lot of great stories and this is just another example of that. Air 'Possum is still my favorite of yours so far though...I haven't read a bad story by you yet...

500 Annies, Boston To Birmingham, Terrible Taste In Tees, Yes, Dear, You Can't Do That are all some of my favorites. Best of all is The Hot List. Every time I read it I realize why I have been married to the same woman for over forty years. THANKS for all of your great stories and I always look forward to reading more of them in the future. Have a great day!

way too sugary and cliché.

Loved it. The deapth of these characters, even Jasmine ;), was amazing. We get to see and feel what Dirk's almost underworld style life is like. Also, really glad to see this will continue. Thanks for sharing your wonderful imagination with us.

Rnebular

It’s nice to see you writing again, and I have to say, I really enjoyed this story.

Can’t wait till the next part!

More please!

Finally a story with some substance. Job well done!

Nice start. But...what happened to Rocky Racoon? Just askin.

wanting to be a White Knight Character, TK U MLJ LV NV

an easy 5*

good.

Great story with a real plot and character development, with just enough sex thrown in to make it good.

Thank you

Best I've read for a very long time can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Finished both chapters and have to say one of the best I've read.

Looking forward to Future tales.

I'm amused that this story first showed up as window dressing in another qmhl1 story: "Eric and Will Make a B Movie."

It's one thing when an author references events or characters in one story in another. It's taking stuff to a whole other level when we're given a whole story conceived by a character in another story.

Good story, by the way.

Looking forward to more.

I would like what Lord _Gro is smoking :D

Fun read. Looking forward to part 2. Thanks for posting. 5, of course.

I've enjoyed your stories, but the improvement with an editor really makes a difference. 5 stars, without a doubt.

3 stars

Little wandering but good

Excellent story, just as enjoyable on the rereading as reading it the first time. Thanks for sharing.

I don't know if your editors pointed this out or nor but having 5+ paragraphs of infodumping right from the start was way too much.

EVER WONDER WHY AN ANON REMAINS AN ANON? NEVER NOTHING NICE TO SAY! ANYWAY, FIRST TIME FOR THIS ONE AND LOVE IT. THANKS QHML1

thanks to your editors, good english.

story, however, is jumbled...not one of your better ones.

the amount of filler is excessive

i meant to give it a charitable three stars, but mouse gave it four

don´t give up. as you must know, you do have talent.

keep the editors.

Lost me at “I kissed back, surprised at how good it felt,”. Can’t stand the fag fiction.

Yep, another good one.

As a new author, appreciated the comment on 'anon'.

Love the characters, and the teases of back stories. I see another branching network of tales here.

I was pulled into it like it was swirling around, capturing me. Damn, you are a good writer.

THANKS

Oh yeah, this is really going to be a good one.

Really appreciate the slow build. Bravos.

Loved it. There was a plot and not just falling into bed immediately. The camping trip was something new and falling in love at the end seemed very natural. Great Story!

Outstanding so far.

Excellent story, great job of developing the characters, and the storyline keeps flowing.

Outstanding all over: story line, plot, characters, actions, etc. Loved it. Does it show?

5* with no restriction

BJ

Fantastic!! And there’s a part 2!

Bill S.

I think Dirk has found a wife and her name will be MOMMY soon!

Great story

Scores 5/5

Really great story. Looking forward to the conclusion.

I am usually the positive one with my comments, defending the author's against the negative readers. Sadly it is I that is the negative one this time, not this author's best, still a 4* (but I have always given him 5 - I think) lots of chaff amongst the wheat, lots of holes in plot, lots of unbelievable corny bits

Another heartwarming story from you, qhml1. Nice going. 5 stars!!!

THANK YOU for writing and putting on LE. Looking forward to what happens next. 5 STARS.