All Comments on 'Dark Horse: Tales from the Ranch Ch. 03'

by AwkwardMD

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thisguyrightherethisguyrighthereover 9 years ago
Delightfully interesting...

Very well written piece you have here, Doc.

Little different from the norm... But that's what makes it interesting. If I can be honest with you, the sex scenes could be a little longer and more descriptive, but that's up to you.

I'd like to see where this goes if you aren't finished with it yet. Until then!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I've been reading on because I really wanted a resolution where someone escaped and Winters got her deserved punishment. Can't believe no one outed her to the vet, not even Nora.

AwkwardMDAwkwardMDabout 3 years agoAuthor

Only Velvet is really allowed to interact with outsiders. Everyone rlse is a flight risk, and Winters keeps them hidden.

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