You're getting better. Though it would have been nice if you hadn't written the character Kiara so cold hearted. It would have been nice if she had done something to comfort her friend instead of just going to bed.
I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...