by Samuelx
With things you do not understand,as the first poster says this is a slight improvement.
Story would have been better if you wrote what college Lucifer went to and what sports programs they offered.
You better be careful sambox or the devil may come visit you tonight while your laying in bed jacking off. sambo the albino, yikes.
A full moon again,you want to watch your arse Sambo you will end up getting it scorched by old Nick himself.
It's a great plot. It will be interesting to see where you'll take this story