All Comments on 'Dark Moon Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i love this story.

Thanks for updating so soon.

I cant wait for the one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
cool

like the update looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing. mechmanas

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
getting better...

wow! the chapters are getting better, more exciting... and... i can't get enough. please no war. :( i am sad as to what the rescue would result to...but natalie should change her ways......haaaayyy.....

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Frustrating

"he would destroy the Alpha"

How does that work exactly? Either the alpha's whim is law and he's the toughest around or else why is he the alpha?

If position is hereditary then how did Passion get demoted? If position is earned how is Joshua an alpha?

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 5 years ago

"And you think fucking the Alpha is any better!" Brent yelled, slamming his fist against his thigh. " Well, duhhh… Beta!

Frakkin' retard.

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