All Comments on 'Dark Reasons Ch. 04'

I liked it! More soon please!

I am thrilled to be reading some more of your work! I can't believe that this is a repost! I've told you before that you have such a variety of storylines pulsating in your veins and am so glad for the opportunity to read something that you are just reposting! Can't wait for much more!

So happy to get my daily Danielle fix even if its a repost. I havent read this one tho! So I'm looking forward to more. Keep working on tigers love. its so yummy!

As always your writing has me hooked!

When are you getting back to KING OF HEARTS?

You have me hooked, and then leave me hanging!

Hurry!!

Nice work. With your latest revelation about Kevin's apparent cultured background, it'll be interesting to see what you have written about his background, to be revealed.

-- KK in Texas

you are a master of stories that blend mystery, intrigue, and romance ... and of course hot sex. great story, looking forward to more on this one and the others.

ok, maybe I'm slow, but I just don't follow this exchange:

>>"Will you take a pain pill?" "I don't need on..." The look in his eye shut her up. "Are they mild? I can't do my job if I'm running into walls."

"No, just huge hands." He tipped the cup she held with his finger, peering into it.<<

Huh? I've read this over and over to see what I missed but I'm just not getting why he responded "no, just huge hands."

Anyone?

Love reading your stories.

I believe the good doctor was referring to the huge hands of the killer who was beating her pretty badly before the car crashed.

Excited for more!

first time reader for this story keep it coming I love it so far you do great work I wont to read everything you have written it I can.

That was very good. The only criticism I have is on the absence of the doctor's motives for wanting to go to the Police station with Jenna. I had my fair share of medical life, and it's rather hard to believe that a doctor would want to get involved with a patient. Also, as you'd already mentioned in the story, he was very tired. And doctors are usually tired after work, especially if there's an outbreak of illness. Anyhow, I'll just settle on my own explanation: curiosity. Police work - very fascinating.

please keep writing... your style is descriptive enough to detail the story, yet vague enough that i can imagine my own personal details. i'm looking forward to making my way through the rest of your manuscripts. i would love to help in your editing process if you would like. (foolsfriend8800@gmail.com) sometimes the extra set of eyes can help! happy writing!

Great writing.

Don't know about the editing - usually notice mistakes but probably too caught up in story.