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"So, I get offered life instead of the death penalty. But only if I tell you where I hid the bodies. It's all so thrillerish, Detective." He looked at Jenna. "You were prettier as a blonde."
"Ouch, now that just hurts my feelings, Kevin." She pulled a strand of silky hair away from her face, pretended to study the color.
"This is a one time offer only, Kevin."
Kevin's eyes swiveled back to Justin, stared for a second and then returned to watching Jenna. He seemed fascinated by the way her fingers played with the hair.
Jenna leaned forward a little and combed her fingers through the now dry locks. It was creepy, the way his eyes watched her. If he liked to watch though, she'd handle the creeps and do what she had to do to get what she needed.
"Okay," Kevin said. "But I'll only talk to her."
"That's not the way this works.."
"It's okay, Justin." Jenna said, interrupting him. "If he wants to tell me, I'll listen. Let's get it set up." She glanced over at her partner, noted the frown in his eyes. "Let's get the equipment set up," she repeated, making sure he got the message in her eyes. She would be fine.
Justin got up and went to the door, pulling it open without a backward glance. He only felt comfortable leaving her in there despite the chains and cuffs on Kevin Elliott because he knew they were being watched through the one way mirror. And he knew Kevin knew that too. But he still didn't like it. He didn't like it at all.
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- COMMENTS
ausvirgoover 7 years agoGreat writing.
Don't know about the editing - usually notice mistakes but probably too caught up in story.
Anonymousover 12 years agoplease keep writing... your style is descriptive enough to detail the story, yet vague enough that i can imagine my own personal details. i'm looking forward to making my way through the rest of your manuscripts. i would love to help in your editing process if you would like. (foolsfriend8800@gmail.com) sometimes the extra set of eyes can help! happy writing!
Anonymousover 15 years agoThat was very good. The only criticism I have is on the absence of the doctor's motives for wanting to go to the Police station with Jenna. I had my fair share of medical life, and it's rather hard to believe that a doctor would want to get involved with a patient. Also, as you'd already mentioned in the story, he was very tired. And doctors are usually tired after work, especially if there's an outbreak of illness. Anyhow, I'll just settle on my own explanation: curiosity. Police work - very fascinating.
Shondramwwover 15 years agofirst time reader for this story keep it coming I love it so far you do great work I wont to read everything you have written it I can.
