All Comments on 'Dark Reasons Ch. 15-16'

I loved this story!! Just sad that it is now ended. <sigh> Can't wait for more! Thought I had it figured out but I had pieces wrong.

And I was so sure it was Justin, lol! Well done!

aww love the ending. I was sure it was justin and i thought you said it was him in the previous chapter, so i went to check, and nope, your just tricky. Great story. Lee in NYC

I had to admit, I fell for it being Justin, too. Should have known Worth was at least a suspect. Well done! Can't wait for the next one!

This was a delightful story, filled with surprises. But then, that's something you do so well. Keep writing!

-- KK in Texas

that I've been reading this story, something was strikingly familiar. Is this a re-post of a story that used to be in your collection? Or am I crazy and just thinking I've read this somewhere before? Oh well.

Ok that was really good. Well at least i got the cop part right. And I'm glad she ended up w/ Ethan (sorry i'm into medicine)

I fucking knew it! I knew it couldnt be either of them! Ha!

I knew you couldnt just be mentioning this Worth dude for no reason! it was either him or Dougie, because they both came out of the blue!

I LOVED this story. AWESOME!

How could I not see that one?!

Great storyline, great characters, just great in general!!

Loved the story line, and great character. My only suggestion you might want to think about some of your technicals, such as in one seen you had the photographer setting up to take pics after the CSI guys had started, that wouldn't happen, in real life photos come first, and also you had one of the vic's working in some kind of store I believe, but never talked about checking out security cameras or anything like that. Anyway just something to think about for future stories.

I thought it was Justin that was doing the killing but it throw me for a loop that it was the officer worth that did the killings. This story rocked. Great job.

I thought it was Justin that was doing the killing but it throw me for a loop that it was the officer worth that did the killings. This story rocked. Great job.

thought she would end up with justin

I was so sure it was the partner! Damn, good writing. Its 03:15 over here and I'm still up coz I couldn't leave this story alone. Hard core, totally Hard Core!

Love the suspense! I thoight it would be Justin,but was really glad that it wasn't him. However it still seems incomplete...why did Worth call himself "D" and was there reason for the modelng and photographing? What's going to happen to Justin? Well, the story was wonderful! Might as well tell you that I couldn't stop reading til i finished...and it is now 3:37 am...anyway can't wait to read the rest of your stories!

Got me thinking it's Justin all along! Well no that's not true I have sudspected Ethan at one point to but so glad it not either of them. The story was great but I do think that is needs alittle more closure with how Justin is going to turn out, both personally and mentally.

this is awesome, like Daniellekitten's other submissions. but...

well, it's actually my fault that there's a 'but'.

when i started reading the series, i kinda pictured Jenna and Justin together and that thing stuck in my head.

so, when i found Jenna and the doc together in this chapter instead of Justin, i was disappointed.

but otherwise, excellent one, Daniellekitten! keep on writing and take care of yourself :)

Murder, mystery, suspense and romance.....what this story has all of. This was a GREAT story and I hope that you will write more of them soon!!!

Wonderful characters and a good plot. Loved it all. My thanks for sharing.

IDB.

I loved this story. It kept me interested till the end. Good job!!!!

Very well written. I'm not usually one for mysteries, but I was hooked all the way through in attempts to decide who the killer was. Thank you for not making it one of the main characters, which always seems too obvious and cheesy.

Can't wait for at least one more chapter

I liked the story a lot, but I Reeeealy think that Justin needs his Own Story. Just Saying. ;)

Whew! I thought I'd reached the end of the last story of yours I hadn't read, but I just checked and there are more - Yippee!!

Keep 'em coming!

Writing comments (and giving 5 stars of course) is a small price to pay for such great stories.

Awesome story series. Very Well written. Spell binding. A very good read! Thank you