All Comments on 'Daughter on Camera'

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fantasyfunchatfantasyfunchatover 6 years ago
a new theme, at last!

Well, first I have to say I don't like every theme you used in this story, but the writing was good and you managed to create a set up that was naughty and nice at the same time and long enough for the readers (including me) get the hang of the characters and care for them during the sex scene.

I'd love to read more, maybe the father meets her 'coworkers', maybe one or more of his old friends find out about the site and she has to deal with a group of older guys who had seen Nicole grow up into a beautiful woman. Maybe a classmate sees one of the girls on the site, someone who had a crush on her, and decides to talk to her. Maybe the 'enterprise' 'evolves' into a call girl service...

If you don't ever continue this story, it is already a very good one. If you ever feel like adding chapters, it could be a great series.

Thanks!

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
WOW...Made me so hoy and hard

Good story.

Hope you bring the other 2 girls into a fun show.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
very hot

I hope my daughter do the same with me

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[23.10.22]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

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